my faimly
i love my faimly!my farther is a boss of a restrant,my mom is a teacher who is teachingin a high school.and i have a lettle brother,he is a cute boy! today,he was played with my classmates,and he make much milk onto his hair,we laugh it many time.today we are very happy.my parents want to go to travel with us,but i am working in a suppermarket,so they have to change their plan,that is too bad!But after one month,i will go to collage,i am very happy about it!
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my family
I love my family ! My father is a boss of a restaurant and my mom is a teacher who is teaching in a high school. I have a little brother, he is a cute boy! Today, he played with my classmates, and he make much milk onto his hair (he spilled milk on his hair maybe?), we laughed a lot. Today we are very happy. My parents want to go to travel with us but I am working in a supermarket so they have to change their plan, which is too bad! In one month I will go to college and I am very happy about it!I didn't highlight every correction I made which was mostly capitalization and some punctuation, I hope this helps!
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my faimly
i love my faimly family! my farther is a boss of a restrant restaurant, my mom is a teacher who is teachingin teaching a in high school and i have a lettle little brother,he is a cute boy! today,he was played playing with my classmates and he make much spilled? milk onto his hair,we laughed at it many times. Today we are very happy.my parents want to go to travel with us but i am working in a suppermarket,so they have had to change their plan,that is too bad!But after one month,i will go to college,i am very happy about it!Nice. Double check the spelling though.
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