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Travel to Taiwan Last week I traveled to Taipei. I stayed there for 6 days.It was so hot with humidity. I have some Japanese and Taiwanese friends who are living in Taipei. One of them is Japanese girl,she is a Japanese teacher in a Japanese language school. One day in the afternoon I went to traditional Taiwanese tea house with her. On the way to there it began to rain suddenly. We drunk Taiwanese tea with traditional tea pots and tea cups which were beautiful. It was so relax moment.

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Travel to Taiwan

Last week I traveled* to Taipei. I stayed there for 6 days.It was so hot with humidity. (or "It was very hot and humid")
I have some Japanese and Taiwanese friends who are living in Taipei.
One of them is Japanese girl,she is a Japanese teacher in a Japanese language school. **

One day in the afternoon I went to traditional Taiwanese tea house with her. On the way to there it began to rain suddenly.
We drunk drank*** Taiwanese tea with traditional tea pots and tea cups which were beautiful. It was so relax moment.


* "Traveled" - This is good. That's how I spell it. But you'll often see it spelled "travelled" with two Ls, especially in England.

 ** This line should either be two sentences, or remove the subject in the second part, as I did in the correction.

*** English verb tenses are complicated. "Drunk" is only used in Perfect tenses with the verb "to have" ("had drunk" "having drunk" etc.) OR when you've had too much alcohol. (ガハハ . . . )


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Travel My trip to Taiwan

Last week I traveled to Taipei. I stayed there for 6 days.It was so hot with the humidity. I have some Japanese and Taiwanese friends who are living in Taipei. One of them is a Japanese girl,she who is a Japanese teacher in a Japanese language school. One day in the afternoon I went to a traditional Taiwanese tea house with her. On the way to there it began to rain suddenly.
We drunk Taiwanese tea with traditional tea pots and tea cups which were beautiful. It was so relax such a relaxing moment.
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Travel to Taiwan

Last week I traveled to Taipei. I stayed there for 6 days.It was so hot with humidity.
I have some Japanese and Taiwanese friends who are living in Taipei.
One of them is Japanese girl,she is a Japanese teacher in a Japanese language school.
One day in the afternoon I went to traditional Taiwanese tea house with her. On the way to there it began to rain suddenly.
We drunk Taiwanese tea with traditional tea pots and tea cups which were beautiful. It was so relax moment. This is a beautiful day，I watch TV for a whole day in the hotel，end

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