Diary of My Day Off I woke up at 10 a.m. and I went to the laundry to wash my clothes. It was so much that I couldn't wash this week. And I went out to city because I wanted to get some books to study

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Diary of My Day Off I woke up at 10 a.m. and I went to the laundry to wash my clothes. It was so much that I couldn't wash this week. And I went out to city because I wanted to get some books to study English and daily necessities. After that, I hung out with my friends. It was so nice. I went to Japanese translator's house, I've never been to such a beautiful house. It was a structure that surrounds the nice courtyard. So the house was like a circle, I don't know how can I explain even though in Japanese. Anyway it was amazing, so I felt to be in a movie scene. And we ate so nice Japanese food together, it called "Nabe". I really like it. I spent so beautiful times. They picked me up and I felt sleepy in the car. Anyway, I absolutely want to go there again. When I got home, I watched "LOST" and "I Am Legend" while drinking, as my plan. I liked both of them. After watching them, I told a my roommate good night and went to my room. I waited my boyfriend get back home, and I called him. It was such a beautiful day off, so it will be possible to work hard for this day off.

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Diary of My Day Off

I woke up at 10 a.m. and I went to the laundry to wash my clothes. It was so much (do you mean "I had so much clothes to wash" or "I was so busy this week"? It's not clear from this sentence) that I couldn't wash this week. And I went out to the city because I wanted to get some books to study English and daily necessities. After that, I hung out with my friends. It was so nice. I went to a Japanese translator's house, I've never been to such a beautiful house. It was a structure that surrounds the nice courtyard. So the house was like a circle, I don't know how can I explain even though in Japanese. Anyway it was amazing, so I felt to be like I was (or I felt like it should be) in a movie scene. And we ate some nice Japanese food together, it was called "Nabe". I really like it. I spent so such a beautiful times. They picked me up and I felt sleepy (did you actually fall asleep? "sleepy" means you were tired) in the car. Anyway, I absolutely want to go there again.
When I got home, I watched "LOST" and "I Am Legend" while drinking, as was my plan. I liked both of them. After watching them, I told a my roommate good night and went to my room. I waited for my boyfriend get back home, and I called him. It was such a beautiful day off, so it will be possible for me to work hard for this day off.

みずきさん、It sounds like you had a really fun day. The translator's house sounds beautiful. It was very easy to understand most of your Diary Entry. Be careful how you use "so," because you use that word a lot, and sometimes it doesn't fit. Your English is getting better every day, isn't it?

Hello let me try to correct your note:

Diary of My Day-Off

I woke up at 10 a.m. and I went to the laundry to wash my clothes. It was so too much that I couldn't wash this week. And I went out to the city because I wanted to get some books to study English and for my daily necessities. After that, I hung out with my friends. It was so nice. I went to Japanese translator's house, I've never been to such a beautiful house. It was a structure that was surroundsed with the a nice courtyard. So the house was like a circle, I don't know how can I to explain even though in Japanese. Anyway it was amazing, so I felt to be like I was in a movie scene. And we ate so nice Japanese food together, it was called "Nabe". I really liked it. I spent so had a beautiful times. They picked me up and I felt sleepy in the car. Anyway, I absolutely want to go there again.
When I got home, I watched "LOST" and "I Am Legend" while drinking, as my I planned. I liked both of them. After watching them, I told my roommate said good night to my roommate and went to my room. I waited for my boyfriend to get back home, and I called him. It was such a beautiful day-off, so it will be possible to work hard for this day-off.

Avoid using the word 'Anyway' to much. [emoji][emoji]

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