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2016 7 3 It has rained for three day。The ground are damp。I staying at home and writing this composition。My girlfriend sitting on the bad and watching the TV show called Fei Cheng Wu Rao.Its purpose is to help single people finding their lovers.After two months,I will apply for a job,so I am now learning some skills to get ready for job-hunting。Wish me good luck!

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It has rained for three days。The ground is damp。I am staying at home and writing this composition。My girlfriend is sitting on the bad and watching the TV show called "Fei Cheng Wu Rao." Its purpose is to help single people find their lovers. After two months,I will apply for a job, so I am   learning some skills to get ready for job-hunting。Wish me good luck!

You can also take out the "called” in the fourth sentence and just say "the TV show "Fei Chang Wu Rao". It's not wrong to include the "called", just unnecessary. 


Good luck!

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