learn to be a mother
I just become a mother who have two kids,in other words,I have been just deliveried a new baby last month.
Terrible things was happened in last week.My old son had a fever and the illness was keep on one hold week,so he had to stay at home.He needed a lot of my take care and love,but sometime I have to breast-fed new baby,althought the little baby always sleeps.When I took baby in my arms,the old brother would around me and let me to paly with him.I was tired.
I have two babies,but they have only one mother.I need sometimes to adapt to my new life.
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Learning how to be a mother
I just become became a mother who have of two kids, in other words, I have been just deliveried a new baby gave birth to my second child last month.Some terrible things was happened in last week. My older son had a fever that lasted for a week/lasted the whole week and the illness was keep on one hold week,so he had to stay at home. He needed a lot much of of my take care and love, but sometimes I have to breast-fed feed the new baby, althought the little baby always sleeps my little baby is always sleeping.When I took the baby in my arms, the older brother would around me and let ask me to paly play with him.I was tired.
I have two babies kids/children,but they have only one mother.I need sometimes to adapt to my new life.
Fixed some of the incorrect tense, made some sentences sound more natural, fixed the few spelling errors in there too. Any questions, please ask.
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