Wonderful Life
My baby daughter wake up at six oclock, one hour later we go to the mart to buy some fresh vegetable and fruit.
Wonderful life starts in the morning！
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Wonderful Life
My baby daughter woke up at six o'clock. One/An hour later, we went to the store* to buy some fresh vegetables** and fruit.Wonderful life starts in the morning!
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*You can also say "grocery store", "grocery", "market", "supermarket"
**This is an unnecessary change, but it sounds more natural to say "fruits and vegetables".
Vegetables and fruit is perfectly fine, however whenever I see the two words together, fruit usually precedes vegetables. I have no idea why! But I always hear "eat your fruits and vegetables" or "fresh fruit and veggies". It's just more common for some reason, at least where I live :-) It's not necessary to say it this way, but I just wanted to let you know to help you fine-tune your fluency :-)
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Wonderful Life
My baby daughter wake woke up at six o'clock. An one hour later we go went to the mart rmarket to buy some fresh vegetables and fruit.A wonderful life starts in the morning！
You could use store or grocery store or supermarket instead of "market" above.
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Wonderful Life
My baby daughter woke up at six oclock, one hour later we went to the mart to buy some fresh vegetables and fruit. A wonderful life starts in the morning！0
Awesome! It must be awesome to have a daughter. I hope to have one when I'm at a good age.
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