My best frend. My best friend is my sister. We are twins so, we are always together and we get on well. She is a good person and when I have some problems about anything she is always there to me and

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My best frend. My best friend is my sister. We are twins so, we are always together and we get on well. She is a good person and when I have some problems about anything she is always there to me and also If I do something wrong, she tells me in order to be better and I do the same to her. Also, we love to spend time with our family and play soccer. In the future, when a work and have enough money, I would like to travel to Japan or Canada with my family and have a good time.

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My best frend.

My best friend is my sister. We are twins so, (comma not needed) we are always together and we get on well.
She is a good person and when I have some problems about anything she is always there to (for) me and also If I do something wrong, she tells me in order to be better and I do the same to her. Also, we love to spend time with our family and play soccer.

In the future, when a (I) work and have enough money, I would like to travel to Japan or Canada with my family and have a good time.

Good job on the entry. There are just a few errors. The third sentence is what is called a run-on sentence and could be divided into two or three. Keep up the good work and bien hecho (hopefully I said that right.)

My best frend.

My best friend is my sister. We are twins so, we are always together and we get along well.
She is a good person and when I have some problems about anything she is always there for me and If I do something wrong, she tells me so I can be better and I do the same to her. Also, we love to spend time with our family and play soccer.

In the future, when I work and have enough money, I would like to travel to Japan or Canada with my family and have a good time.

Puede escribir muy bien. No pare estudiar ingles.

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