my pet my cat named thomas is very cute, funny and playful. His hair is yellow with stripes. He has green eyes and the majority of the time he sleeps much.

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my pet

my cat named thomas is very cute, funny and playful. His hair is yellow with stripes. He has green eyes and the majority of the time he sleeps much.

My cat "Thomas" is cute, funny, and playful. He has green eyes and yellow fur with (WHITE) stripes. Thomas sleeps most of the day.

Comment: (1) It is better to add the color of his stripes. I just assumed the stripes are white. (2) There is no need to say "named thomas." You can write My cat "Thomas" or simply My cat Thomas (informal). (3) I would drop the "very' in the first sentence because you are listing his qualities. You could also say: My cat Thomas is funny, playful, and very (or really) cute.

My Pet

My cat's named is Thomas. He is very cute, funny[,]* and playful. His hair fur is yellow with stripes. He has green eyes, and the majority of the time he is sleeping much.

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