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The Trip Today promises to be a long day. I have to travel and I say I have because it was totally an unexpected trip, but necessary. I'll take a bus. I'll take me around 3 hours to arrive at the town, but before I leave home, I have a long list of things to do. Some home chores, laundry, ironing to have ready my clothes, and make another list of things not to forget to pack. I'd like to take my dog with me and bring joy to my nephews but I can't for the moment the car is not available. Although it's for sure my aunty could die of happiness when I knock her doors. I haven't seen her for 2 years. She used to visit my house before, but now she is 66 or 67 and her eyes don't help as it once was. I have another surprise for her, maybe 30 years ago she helped a young man to be somebody in life. Now "the young man" came to visit her, now he is a family man, older too, and he made a long travel for visiting his family, included my aunty in his list. My aunty won't believe it!. She doesn't have idea that this old man with gray hair is her dear Charles. I can't wait to meet me with him and his family! and see the face and tears of joy of my aunty!!. Please, feel free to make corrections, adding conjunctions and linking phrases, native phrases .. etc. to help my paragraph makes sense. TY!!

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The Trip

Today promises to be a long day. I have to travel and I say "I have to" because it is was totally an unexpected trip, but necessary trip. I'll take a bus. It'll take me around 3 hours to arrive at the town, but before I leave home, I have a long list of things to do: some home household chores, laundry, ironing to have ready my clothes, and making another list of things not to not forget to pack. I'd like to take my dog with me and to bring joy to my nephews, but I can't for the moment because the car is not available.
Although it's for I'm sure my auntie would could die of happiness when I knock on her doors. I haven't seen her for 2 years. She used to visit my house before, but now she is 66 or 67 and her vision isn't what it used to be eyes don't help as it once was.
I have another surprise for her. Around maybe 30 years ago, she helped a young man to become somebody in life. Now "the that "young man" will came to visit her. now He is now a family man, older too, and he made a long will travel from afar to for visiting his family, including my auntie in his list. My auntie won't believe it!. She doesn't have any idea that this old man with gray hair is her dear Charles. I can't wait to meet me with him and his family! and see the face and tears of joy of my auntie!!.

Please, feel free to make corrections, adding conjunctions and linking phrases, native phrases .. etc. to help my paragraph makes sense. TY!!
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Thank you Lynne, I didn't realize of this mistake, you know it's Spanish, I really appreciate your valuable contribution. I'm at your service, when you want to practice Spanish just let me know. ok. Have a lovely weekend.
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Hi Dorita. I've only begun to read your article. At the end of the second line, you should have said: It will take me, not I'll take me. You need to use "it" because the "it" refers to the trip. It's like saying: the trip will take me about 3 hours......

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