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Today is qingmingjie last day. I am so tired that don't want to go anywhere. I play pc all day.only simply cook some food.
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Write about what happened today
Original: Today is qingmingjie last day. I am so tired that don't want to go anywhere. I play pc all day.only simply cook some food.
Revision: Today is the last day of the 'Tomb Sweeping Day'* festival. I am so tired, so I don't want to go anywhere. I've been playing on my computer all day, and cooked some food.**
*「清明節」英文經常呌'Tomb Sweeping Day'.
** Or /All I plan to do today is play on my computer, and cook some food./ It depends on which tense you want to use.
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