What a Nightmare!
I dreamed that a friend of mine died.
I didn’t know the cause of his death so I asked someone about it at his funeral service.
me: What happened to him?
her: A fire broke out from a house next to him.
me: (ah so….he got caught in the fire)
her: and he was trying to take a picture of it on a tree and fell to the ground. That’s why.
me: ....
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What a Nightmare!
I dreamed that a friend of mine died.I didn’t know the cause of his death so I asked someone about it at his funeral service.
Me: What happened to him?
Her: A fire broke out at a house next to him.
Me: (Ah, so….he got caught in the fire)
Her: And he was trying to take a picture of it in a tree and fell to the ground. That’s why he died.
Me: ....
Your meaning is very clear and your English is very natural :) just be careful of the capital letters.
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What a Nightmare!
I dreamt that a friend of mine died.
I didn’t know the cause of his death, so I asked someone about it at his funeral service.
Me: What happened to him?
Her: A fire broke out from a house, next to his.
Me: (Ah so, he got caught in the fire?)
Her: And he was trying to take a picture of it on from a tree and fell to the ground. That’s how! why.
Me: ....
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Hello Jordyn, Thank you for your comment. I knew AND can't be put at the beginning of a sentence, but I wanted to make it sound like her conversation started in the middle of a phrase because () was my inner voice. This was one phrase. "A fire broke out from a house next to him, and he was trying to take a picture of it on a tree and fell to the ground. That’s why" How do I need to write?
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Hello Okimuy! Nice job on this entry. Your English is very understandable. Just don't forget capital letters at the beginning of sentences. It's also not actually proper to begin a sentence with "and". This holds true mostly in writing. When speaking it's not so noticeable. Keep up the good work!
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