Hello, this is my first day here
I study English for a few years and I really wanted to practice and learn more about the language. I'm going to Orlando next month and it will be my first trip to USA, I'm very excited about it, I'm going with a friend, she never left Brazil, we're going to the parks, it will be a dream come true.
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Hello, this is my first day here.
I have studied English for a few years and I really wanted to practice and learn more about the language. I'm going to Orlando next month and it will be my first trip to USA. I'm very excited about it! I'm going with a friend and she has never left Brazil before. We're going to go to the parks. It will be a dream come true!0
Hi. You should have said "I have studied English for a few years......". You should have written "to the USA" and put a period after USA because that was the end of your sentence. I'm very excited about it is a complete sentence, so should have a period (punto) at the end. Also, I'm going with a friend is a complete sentence and should have a period at the end. She never left Brazil is also a complete sentence and should have a period at the end. We're going to the parks is a complete sentence and should have a period at the end. But, I hope you and your friend have a great time in Orlando !!!!! :)
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Hello. This is my first day here.
I studied English for a few years and I really want to practice and learn more about the language. I'm going to Orlando next month and it will be my first trip to USA. I'm very excited about it. I'm going with a friend, who had never left Brazil before. We're going to the parks, and it will be a dream come true.Want to progress faster?
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