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Mico
Travel diary [emoji]bye bye Bangkok! Hi everyone! I'm a 19years girl like to keep trying new things and challenging myself! I just traveling in Bangkok few days ago,it was very amazing!! Everyone there was very kind and patient to me when I got some problems. And I did go to chatuchuck market and terminal 21,big C,central word...exc. My favorite place is chatuchuck! I bought some beautiful clothes and bags there,also eat thaifood and went to massage! My hotel is near BTS Sanam pao station ,it was very easy and convenient to go to every where by BTS! Also I tried duk duk car,100% exciting hahaha! BTW I meet so much people from Hong Kong,they're sooo kind to me when I got lost or dangerous,I'm very impressed and THANKFULL !!!! That's my second time go abroad in my life. This time I went to Bangkok with my bestie, just two19 years girls! It was very interesting and excited!!!! I'll gonna miss Bangkok soo much,and I'll go again!! But first I'll go to Japan or Korea at December with my families! I can't wait!!! I like to recording life experience and images by photo,and that's my Instagram @aboutmico [emoji] Sorry about bad English, I'll keep studying and thank you so much for read!!

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Travel diary [emoji]bye bye Bangkok!

Hi everyone! I'm a 19years old girl who likes to keep trying new things and challenging myself! I have just travelleding in to Bangkok a few days ago, it was very amazing!! Everyone there was very kind and patient towards/with me when I had got some problems. And I did go went to Chatuchuck market and terminal 21, big C, central word...etc. My favorite place is chatuchuck! I bought some beautiful clothes and bags there, also eat ate Thai food and went for a to massage!  My hotel is near BTS Sanam pao station , so it was very easy and convenient to go to everywhere by BTS!  Also I tried duk duk car, 100% exciting hahaha! BTW I [meet]/have met so many much people from Hong Kong, they're sooo kind to me when I got lost or am in dangerous, I'm very impressed and THANKFULL !!!!
That's This is my second time to go abroad in my life. This time I went to Bangkok with my bestie, just two 19 years old girls! It was very interesting and excitinged!!!!
I'll gonna miss Bangkok soo much, and I'll go again!!  But first I'll go to Japan or Korea at in December with my familyies! I can't wait!!!
I like to recording life experience and images by photo,and that's my Instagram @aboutmico [emoji]
Sorry about my bad English, I'll keep studying, and thank you so much for reading !!

Your English is not bad, that means it's good !

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Thank you so much[emoji][emoji] I'll remember and keep studying!!!!!!
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Remember that in English you place spaces after punctuation marks, such as commas. Also, in English age is expressed as "years old" not just "years", and there is a space between the numerals and the word years. Thus you would say that you are a 19 year old girl or you are 19 years old. And even though most families include more than one person the group that is a family is singular, so you would like to go to Japan with your family.

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