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The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries from UK residents to visit.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first chart compares the different numbers between UK residents who visit abroad and overseas residents who visit to the UK.
We can see that the UK residents who visit abroad occupy a higher proportion throughout this period, with 13 millions in 1979 and rose to more than 53 millions in 1999. The number of overseas residents who visit to the UK grew more slowly, with 10 millions in 1979 and reached to 27 millions in 1999. The trend of the number of UK residents and overseas residents were both increased during this time.
The second graph bellow shows us the most popular countries that UK residents liked to visit in 1999. It is easy to find immediately that France (11 million of visitors) was the most attractive place to UK residents, and Spain followed closely which is the second popular country with 9 million visitors that UK residents wanted to go. Meanwhile, there were three more countries included USA, Greece and Turkey appeared on the popularity ranking, the number of visitors of them were 4 million, 3 million and 2 million respectively.
To sum up, it is possible to see that the number of British visitor and overseas visitors will increase constantly in the future, and France and Spain may still retain a dominated position of popular countries visited by UK residents.
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Could you help me to correct the mistakes? ^_^
Topic:The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first chart compares the different numbers of UK residents who go abroad and overseas residents who visit to the UK.
We can see that the UK residents who visit abroad occupy a higher proportion throughout this period, with 13 millions in 1979 and rose to more than 53 millions in 1999. The number of overseas residents who visit to the UK grew more slowly, with 10 millions in 1979 and reached to 27 millions in 1999. The trend of the number of UK residents and overseas residents were both increased during this time.
The second graph bellow shows us the most popular countries that UK residents liked to visit in 1999. It is easy to find immediately that France (11 million of visitors) was the most attractive place to UK residents, and Spain followed closely as the second most popular country with 9 million visitors from the UK. Meanwhile, there were three more countries included on the popularity ranking: USA, Greece and Turkey appeared on the popularity ranking, the number of visitors of them were 4 million, 3 million and 2 million respectively.
To sum up, it is possible to see that the number of British visitors and overseas visitors will increase constantly in the future, and France and Spain may still retain a dominated positions as popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Maybe there are lots of mistakes in this essay, could you help me to correct them? Thanks! ^_^
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