June 27/2016

I don't know why, but I don't like Mondays. It isn't a boring day, but I don't know, I just don't like it.

I'm not excited to write here today, because I'm sleepy. Even so, I'm going to write a bit.

I would like to have woke up at 7:00 a.m., but I didn't get it. Unfortunately I woke up at 8:00 a.m., but it's okay. I like to wake early to enjoy my day. I need to study more and more!

I left my bedroom, I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face. I left the bathroom and I went to the kitchen to have my breakfast.

I left the kitchen and I went to my bedroom to make my bed and to study. I made my bed, then I sat down in my chair, looking to the at my desk and I began to study.

At 12:00 I heated up thereheated my lunch and I made salad. My uncle and I ate lunch while we were watching the news on tv.

I left the TV room and I went into the kitchen, I washed the crockery and I cleaned the floor. I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth, then I left the bathroom and I went back to my bedroom to study again.

At 5:00 I ate my snack, I ate smashed bananas with honey. I went back to my room to study. At 6:00 my uncle and I went for run, it was a good run. We bought breads (here it "bread" would be singular unless you bought more than one type of bread."We bought bread" if it was just a loafs of the same kind. But, "we bought breads" if you got white bread and also wheat or another kind.) too.

When we arrived in came home and I took I shower, a relaxing shower. I left the bathroom and went to my bedroom, I put on my clothes. Again, I'm back to studying again.

It's 11:30 p.m., I'm going to bed, I feel so sleepy. Bye bye

Can someone please contact me?
Thank you very much! I would love someone correct me. :)                                                                                                                                                                               

Hello, great job your English is really great! Some tips for the future: a lot of the sentences were redundant. When you were explaining the things that you've done you don't always have to say where you went and also where you're coming from. An example " I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth. I left the bathroom to go to my room." It is implied that you were just in the bathroom, so you don't have to say it again. Instead, try " I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth. Then, I went to my room to study." Do you understand?  But, great job! keep practicing because you're doing great!

June 27/2016

I don't know why, but I don't like Mondays. It isn't a boring day, but I don't know, I just don't like it.

I'm not excited to write here today, because I'm sleepy. Even so, I'm going to write a bit.

I would like to have woke up at 7:00 a.m., but I didn't make it. Unfortunately I woke up at 8:00 a.m., but it's okay. I like waking early to enjoy my day. I need to study more and more!

I left my bedroom, I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face. I left the bathroom and I went to the kitchen to have my breakfast.

I left the kitchen and I went to my bedroom to make my bed and to study. I made my bed, then I sat down on my chair, looking to the desk I began to study.

At 12:00 I heated up the lunch and I made a salad. My uncle and I was having lunch while we were watching the news on tv.

I left the TV room and I went to the kitchen, I washed the crockery and I cleaned the floor. I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth, then I left the bathroom and I went back to my bedroom to study again.

At 5:00 I ate my snack, I ate smashed bananas with honey.Then I went back to study. At 6:00 my uncle and I went to run, it was a good running. We bought breads too.

When we arrived in home I took a shower, a relaxing shower. I left the bathroom and went to my bedroom, I put in my clothes. Again, I'm back to studying.

It's 11:30 p.m., I'm going to bed, I feel so sleepy. Bye bye

Can someone please contact me?
Thank you very much! I would love someone correct me. :)