This is a brief introduction, is it correct?
Hello, my name is Stephen Chan, come from china. I am a junior student in college and my major is human resource management. I am learning English recently but still very poor, So I found this website where I can learn English efficiently and hope to make friends with you. I'm a big fan of sport and music. In my leisure time I usually play badminton or jog outside.what's more, I can play the bamboo flute which is a kind of Chinese traditional musical instrument and I always practice it. I want to have a further study abroad after I graduate and now I'm preparing for my language and GPA. I believe that if I study hard enough, I will gain a good achievement.
Ha ha, how formal the introduction is. If there are any mistakes, please help me to correct them. Thank you! ^_^
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This is a brief introduction. Is it correct?
Hello! My name is Stephen Chan and I come from China. I am a junior student in college and my major is Human Resource Management. At this time I am learning English but it is still very poor, so I found this website where I can learn English effectively and hope to make friends with you. I'm a big fan of sport(s) and music. In my leisure time I usually play badminton or jog outside.What's more, I can play the bamboo flute which is a kind of Chinese traditional musical instrument and I always practice it. I want to have further study abroad after I graduate and now I'm preparing for my language exam (exam?) and GPA. I believe that if I study hard enough, I will achieve my goal of a good score.Ha ha, how formal this introduction is. If there are any mistakes, please help me to correct them. Thank you! ^_^
******Nicely written. Just a few corrections. Bamboo flute...how nice! Do many people know how to play this instrument?
In American/North American English we say "sports" which includes many but I know British English uses just the word "sport".
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Hello, my name is Stephen Chan. I come from China. I'm a junior student in college and my major is human resource management. Recently, I have been learning English, but I still need more practice. As a result, I found this website where I can learn English efficiently and I hope to make friends with more people. I'm a big fan of sport and music. In my leisure time, I usually play badminton or jog outside. Furthermore, I can play the bamboo flute, which is a kind of Chinese traditional musical instrument, and I always practice it. I want to have a further study abroad after I graduate and now I'm preparing for my language requirements and GPA. I believe that if I study hard enough, I can achieve great things!
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