At the pool
It's been my first day at the pool so far this summer. I've sunbathed and read a magazine for a while and I've even seen a new lifeguard. There weren't many people and the water was very cold but it's been fun. If the water had been hotter I would have swum longer. Before too long I'll go back to the pool again.
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At the pool
It's been my first day at the pool so far this summer. I sunbathed and read a magazine for a while and I even saw a new lifeguard. There weren't many people and the water was very cold but it was fun. If the water had been hotter I would have swum for longer. Before too long I'll go back to the pool again soon.I would use this version of the past tense for an action/event that was completed recently. Good work!
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At the pool
It's been my first day at the pool so far, this summer. I've sunbathed and read a magazine for a while and I've even seen a new lifeguard replace the current one. There weren't many people and the water was very cold but it's been fun. If the water had been hotter, I would have swum longer. Before too long I'll go back to the pool again, soon.
Well done, keep practicing!
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