Phrases. Would you like to correct this for me, please?
"I have visited many countries but I ve never seen this".
"This morning I ve gone to donate some blood and when I have to fill a sheet with many questions, one of them was if I had been in an another country , my reply or answer was "YES" because I ve been to CHina so the nurse said I couldn´t donate it."
I lost many friends ,as you know because of caring of my mother and I was a litte tired, even I lost my life.
I am tired to take care my mother.
Every time I go to the police to fill the sheets of visa, they put a lot of problems, the police
puts the fear in the body saying he would commit a felony, if he came and stayed in my country and would never go back his country I would have an harsh punishment as to promote the ilegal inmigration and besides all that I would have to pay a fine, even they could condemn to 8 years in prison.
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Phrases. Would you like to correct this for me, please? Would you please correct this for me?
"I have visited many countries but I ve never seen this"."This morning I went to donate some blood and
(I lost many) I don't see my friends much friends
I am tired to take care my mother. I am tired FROM taking care of my mother (it makes me tired to care for her)) o I am tired OF taking care of my mother--I wish I didn't have to. el sentido cambia con una preposicion diferente
Every time I go to the police to fill out a visa application, they give me a lot of problems, the police
puts the fear in the body saying he would commit a felony,
if he came and stayed in my country and never went back to his country then I would have a harsh punishment for promoting the ilegal inmigration and besides all that I would have to pay a fine, even they could even condemn me to 8 years in prison.
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Phrases. Would you like to correct this for me, please?
"I have visited many countries but I ve never seen this i haven't met this kind of incident"."This morning I ve gone to donate some blood and when I have to fill-up a sheet with many questions, one of them was if I had been in an another country , my reply or answer was "YES" because I ve been to China, so then the nurse said I couldn´t donate it."
I lost many friends ,as you know because of for taking caring of my mother and I was a litte tired, even I lost my life. K(The thought doesn't match) I am so tired, I even lost my own life.
I am tired to take care my mother. I am tired- taking care of my mother.
Every time I go to the police(station) to fill-up the some sheets of for visa, they put a lot of problems, (the police
puts the fear in the body saying he would commit a felony, if he came and stayed in my country and would never go back his country)/dont understand this part/ I would have a harsh punishment for promoting ilegal inmigration and would have to pay a fine, even they could they could even condemn me to 8 years in prison.
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Here are the first paragraphs, the last one was too unclear to be translated clearly.
"I have visited many countries, but never before have I seen this.
This morning, I went to donate blood and I was required to complete a series of questions. One of the questions was if I "had been in an another country." My response was "YES," because I had been to China, so the nurse said that I was not allowed to donate blood.
I have lost many friends, as you know, because of caring of my mother. During this time, I was so tired that I also lost my life.
I'm too exhausted to take care of my mother."
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