feeling lost , if there any mistakes please let me know , thanks in advance
I'm just a boy , who lived normal all of his 20 years , till one day , i saw her , she was like an angel , no words could ever describe the feeling that i felt when i saw her , yea . i did full in love at the very first sight . anyway i talked to her and we became together for about 3 years , my best 3 years in ma life , at that point , i decided to purpose , and i did , so she became my fiance , i couldn't believe myself , finally , she's mine , she's my fiance :) , but as usual , like the 90% of all the true love stories , we broke up for some reasons , the funny thing that we still love each other , but we can't talk , can't be together again , for some reasons :S anyway , did you ever felt like the all world meaning less , nothing could makes me happy again , i can't taste anything in life now , what ever it was joyful , i'll still in miserable , it's really painful , and by the way , to those who say that in time , you will forget her , i used to listen to stuff like that , but you know what , it's just getting harder , she was my home , without her , i'm lost .
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feeling lost , if there any mistakes please let me know , thanks in advance
I'm just a boy , who lived normal all of his 20 years a normal life for 20 years , till one day , i saw her , she was like an angel , no words could ever describe the feeling that i felt when i saw her , yeah . i did fall in love at the very first sight . anyway i talked to her and we were together for about 3 years. it was the best 3 years of my life , at that point , (Saying "up until that point isn't really necessary). i decided to propose , and when i did , so she became my fiancé . i couldn't believe myself it, finally , she's mine , she's my fiancé :) . but as usual , like the 90% of all the true love stories , we broke up for some reasons. the funny thing is that we still love each other , but we can't talk , can't or be together again. for some reasons :S anyway , did Do you ever felt feel like the all world is meaningless , nothing could makes me happy again. i can't taste anything in life now. whatever it is joyful , i'll still in be miserable. it's really painful , and by the way , to those who say that in time , you will forget her , i used to listen to stuff like that , but you know what , it's just getting harder , she was my home , without her , i'm lost .I'm so sorry for your loss. Sometimes in life things may not work out the way you want them to. That's okay. But, you're still young and you have a great life to live. Though you may be in pain now from such a devastating heartbreak, you'll grow stronger. It may take you a few months or a few years, but you'll find another love. And that love will be so strong and she will make you so happy you'll grow to understand why it wouldn't have worked out with your ex fiancé. Alway remember that in life there are no mistakes. There is going to be a lot of pain and ups and downs. Good times and bad times, but you're simply supposed to take what's good out of the bad and grow and learn from it. I wish you the best in your life and I hope you find happiness. Also, great job with your English! There was a lot of comma splices (randomly inserted commas) try to work on your sentence structure by incorporating more periods. You add periods when you have completed a thought. If you ever have any questions or need any help with your English please feel free to message me because I would be more than happy to help you!
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I hope so :S , thanks for your concern i appreciate it :)
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Time is everything.You will be better.This thing i have had ,he is my first lover,but for something we also broke up finally.I had ever thought about having him back,but i didn't do this.I am afraid we will break up as the same reason again.So i will be better .i study, workout,travel...I think you will get better as well.
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Thanks Lin , but unfortunately it's complicated now :S
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Don't sadness .You should know that nothing is impossible .Maybe you should have a communication with you lover
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