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The busiest day have gone ( Help me to correct my mistakes, thank you :) ) It's a long time from I last time write this. In the past two months, I learned a lot. I learned departure, sadness and bless others. I graduated from middle school the day before yesterday, uh..I think it's happy but also think it's unhappy. It's a sad ending but it's another good beginning. Yesterday I go to the dentist, and I pulled two teeth, it's really painful, really really really painful. Next mouth I still need to pull another two teeth. Because I want to correct my teeth and make them more orderly. When the night I can't fall asleep because the pain, I nearly wanna give up, but I held on. The heart that loves beauty gives me courage hahahaha. Now I realize, when you want to get something, you must pay for it, if you don't want to afford the cost, don't try it. But if you want to be better, you can have a try. When the hardest days go away, when I become better, I think I will be thankful to today what I do.

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The busiest day have gone ( Help me to correct my mistakes, thank you :) )

It's been a long time since the last time I wrote this. Over the past two months, I learned a lot. I learned departure, sadness and the blessings others. I graduated from middle school the day before yesterday, and I think it's happy but also unhappy (Consider "bittersweet"). It's a sad ending but also a good beginning.
Yesterday I went to the dentist, and I had two teeth pulled. It's really, really, really painful. I still need to have another two teeth pulled next month because I want to correct my teeth and make them more orderly. During the night I can't fall asleep because of the pain. I nearly want to give up, but I hold on (You change tenses often here. Pick one tense and carry it throughout the sentence). The heart that loves beauty gives me courage hahahaha. Now I realize if you want something, you must pay for it. If you don't want to pay the cost, don't try it. But if you want to be better, you can try. After the hardest days, when I become better, I think I will be thankful for what I did today. (You use a lot of commas. Consider breaking up these sentences and reviewing proper comma usage)
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The busiest day have gone ( Help me to correct my mistakes, thank you :) )

It's a long time after  I last time wrote this. In the past two months, I learned a lot. I learned departure, sadness and bless others. I graduated from middle school the day before yesterday, uh..I think it was happy but also think it was  unhappy. It was  a sad ending but it was another good beginning.
Yesterday I go to the dentist, and I pulled two teeth, it was really painful, really really really painful. Next mouth I still need to pull another two teeth. Because I want to correct my teeth and make them more orderly. When the night I can't fall asleep because  of  the pain, I nearly wanna give up, but I held on. The heart that loves beauty gives me courage hahahaha. Now I realize, when you want to get something, you must pay for it, if you don't want to afford the cost, don't try it. But if you want to be better, you can have a try. When the hardest days go away, when I become better, I think I will be thankful to today what I do.

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