It's me
i grew up in a typical working class family.
I was happy untill 15years old.
but suddenly my family had problemed.
my parents has broken up
after that day i soundn't have make money because i need it.
so when I was high school finish class and then I went to part time job.
I hed made mony since that day.
I have lived honestly and diligently
I went to unibercity on a scholarship.
And I graduated university by myself without help enybody.
So, I really proud myself.
Thank you for reading.
Please~let me know if I did something wrong.
And make full sentences.
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It's me.
I grew up in a typical working class family.I was happy until I turned 15 years old.
Suddenly, my family had problem.
My parents had broken up. /My parents broke up.
After that day, I had to make money because I need it.
So, when I was in high school, I had to start working part time after school.
From that day forward, I had to earn money.
I have been living honestly and diligently.
I attended university on a scholarship.
And I graduated university by myself without help from anyone.
So, I am really proud of myself.
Thank you for reading.
Please~let me know if I did something wrong.
And make full sentences.
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I'm the same. Nobody helped me to learn. I did not pay a bribe.
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