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My first and my last pet I guess the best pet I have ever had is a cat. My family does not like cats, so in my childhood I did not have any cats as a pet. When I was studying at college I decided to adopt a cat. Its name was tita, I called her after the movie “Como agua para chocolate”. Up to now I have had six cats, unfortunately some of them have died. The last cat I adopted was pregnant. She is gray and white. At first, I did not know she was pregnant, but a month later her stomach was bigger and the baby cats used to move into her stomach. When the cats were born I was completely surprised: she had three kittens and they looked like a little tiger. One of the oldest female cats, "fredina", did not get along very well with the newly born. I am against buying animals so I thought the best option was give the kittens in adoption. I shared their pictures in a facebook page called “Adopción de gatitos Morelia” and fortunately I found two people to look after them. Finally the cats were adopted and I felt happy about it. In my opinion people should not buy animals, they should adopt pets homeless. I think when you adopt a pet you become in a more sensitive person with the animals. For instance, my cats were fixed, because there are not enough homes to adopt them.

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My first and my last pet

I guess the best pet I have ever had is a cat. My family does not like cats, so in my childhood I did not have any cats as a pet. When I was studying at college I decided to adopt a cat. Its name was Tita, (you’ll want to capitalize proper names) I called her after the movie “Como agua para chocolate.” Up to now I have had six cats, unfortunately some of them have died.
The last cat I adopted was pregnant. She is gray and white. At first, I did not know she was pregnant, but a month later her stomach was bigger and the baby cats used to move into within her stomach. When the cats were born I was completely surprised; she had three kittens and they looked like a little tigers. One of the oldest female cats, “Freudian," did not get along very well with the newly born ones. I am against buying animals so I thought the best option was give the kittens in up for adoption. I shared their pictures in a facebook page called “Adopción de gatitos Morelia” and, fortunately, I found two people to look after them. Finally the cats were adopted and I felt happy about it.
In my opinion people should not buy animals, they should adopt homeless pets homeless. I think when you adopt a pet you become in a more sensitive person with the animals. For instance, my cats were fixed, because there are not enough homes to adopt them.

Excellent writing Edy!  You truly have a good grasp on English!  Well done.

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