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June 26/2016 Sunday I was at the June Party ( in Portuguese 'Festa Junina'), the June Parties are parties held throughout the month of June to commemorate the saints John, Peter and/or Anthony. I like it so much, the best Feasts are in Campina Grande, Caruaru and Salvador, I guess. But I've never been one of them, I hope I'll one day. Anyway, I was at this party, but it was in house of a friend of my godmother. There it was very good! I didn't know almost no one, but even so they received me as if I were a friend. In that party there was : hot punch made from cachaça ( quentão ), candy made of ground peanuts and sugar (paçoquinha), dish made made from grated corn and coconut, boiled with water, milk, sugar and cinnamon ( canjica ), cob, cakes and the more important, the joy. I don't know dance, I'm a disaster, but my uncle made me dance! It's was funny, and not bad.I enjoyed so much that party. There was funny, some women was dresses of man, and some men was dressed of woman. I arrived in home was 3:00 a.m., I was sleepy, so I fell asleep quickly. I woke up at 10:00 a.m. today, my uncle was ever awake and my godmother is sleeping still, it's 10:10 a.m. here. I went to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth. I left the bathroom and I went to the kitchen to have my breakfast. I ate a bread with cheese and I drank coffee. I left the kitchen and I went to the TV room. A bit later, I left the TV room and I went to my bedroom to make my bed and to make some English exercises. My godmother woke up at 12:00 a.m. , she had her breakfast and then she asked me to go to a butcher shop. I went to there, and when I arrived in home we made our lunch. We made : rice, beans, salad, meat with cassava and pumpkin. As dessert my uncle and my godmother ate 'canjica' and I ate brigadier, everything was so delicious. We had our lunch at the table this time. I even made pictures of this, as I said before, I like to make pictures. We left the table and we cleaned the house. I can't wait for watching the movie 'Me Before You', we'll go to the cinema to watch it later. Before we go to cinema, we went to Saraiva ( a big bookstore ), and I'm so happy because my godmother gave me the collection of 'Outlander'. I love books. And then, we went to cinema. Wow, that movie is so beautiful,it's so nice and sad at the same time. I loved that movie, I cried a bit, but it's okay. Almost all the people who were in that cinema cried. It's late here, I'm going to bed!

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June 26/2016 Sunday

I was at the June Party ( in Portuguese 'Festa Junina'), the June Parties are parties held throughout the month of June to commemorate the saints John, Peter and/or Anthony. I like it so much, the best Feasts are in Campina Grande, Caruaru and Salvador, I guess. But I've never been one of them, I hope I'll one day.

Anyway, I was at this party, but it was in house of a friend of my godmother. There it was very good! I didn't know almost no one, but even so they received me as if I were a friend.

In that party there was : hot punch made from cachaça ( quentão ), candy made of ground peanuts and sugar (paçoquinha), dish made made from grated corn and coconut, boiled with water, milk, sugar and cinnamon ( canjica ), cob, cakes and the more important, the joy.

I don't know dance, I'm a disaster, but my uncle made me dance! It's was funny, and not bad.I enjoyed so much that party. There was funny, some women was dresses of man, and some men was dressed of woman.

I arrived in home was 3:00 a.m., I was sleepy, so I fell asleep quickly. I woke up at 10:00 a.m. today, my uncle was ever awake and my godmother is sleeping still, it's 10:10 a.m. here.

I went to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth. I left the bathroom and I went to the kitchen to have my breakfast. I ate a bread with cheese and I drank coffee.

I left the kitchen and I went to the TV room. A bit later, I left the TV room and I went to my bedroom to make my bed and to make some English exercises.

My godmother woke up at 12:00 a.m. , she had her breakfast and then she asked me to go to a butcher shop. I went to there, and when I arrived in home we made our lunch. We made : rice, beans, salad, meat with cassava and pumpkin.

As dessert my uncle and my godmother ate 'canjica' and I ate brigadier, everything was so delicious. We had our lunch at the table this time. I even made pictures of this, as I said before, I like to make pictures.

We left the table and we cleaned the house. I can't wait for watching the movie 'Me Before You', we'll go to the cinema to watch it later.

Before we go to cinema, we went to Saraiva ( a big bookstore ), and I'm so happy because my godmother gave me the collection of 'Outlander'. I love books.

And then, we went to cinema. Wow, that movie is so beautiful,it's so nice and sad at the same time. I loved that movie, I cried a bit, but it's okay. Almost all the people who were in that cinema cried.

It's late here, I'm going to bed!
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June 26/2016 Sunday

I was at a June Party ( in Portuguese 'Festa Junina'). June Parties are  held throughout the month of June to commemorate the saints John, Peter and/or Anthony. I like it so much, the best Feasts are in Campina Grande, Caruaru and Salvador, I guess. But I've never been in one of them, I hope I'll be able to go one day.

Anyway, I was at this party, it was at my godmother's friend's house. It was very good! I didn't know almost no one, but even so they received/treated me as if I were a friend.

In that party there was : hot punch made from cachaça ( quentão ), candy made of ground peanuts and sugar (paçoquinha), dish made made from grated corn and coconut, boiled with water, milk, sugar and cinnamon ( canjica ), cob, cakes and the more important, the joy.

I don't know how to dance, I'm a disaster, but my uncle made me dance! It was funny, and not bad. I enjoyed it so much. Some of the women were dressed with men clothes and the other way round, that was funny.

I arrived/got at home at 3:00 a.m., I was sleepy, so I fell asleep quickly. I woke up at 10:00 a.m. Today, my uncle was already awake and my godmother was sleeping still, it was 10:10 a.m. here. (If you started the sentence using the simple past, finish it with the same tense)

I went to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth. I left the bathroom and then I went to the kitchen to have my breakfast. I had bread with cheese and some coffee.

I left the kitchen and I went to the TV room. A bit later, I left the TV room and I went to my bedroom to make my bed and to make some English exercises.

My godmother woke up at 12:00 a.m. , she had her breakfast and then she asked me to go to a butcher shop. I went to there, and when I arrived/got at home we made our lunch. We made/cooked : rice, beans, salad, meat with cassava and pumpkin.

As dessert my uncle and my godmother had 'canjica' and I ate/had brigadeiro, everything was so delicious. We had our lunch at the table this time. I even took  pictures of this, as I said before, I like to take pictures. (you don't need to translate the name of the food)

We left the table and we cleaned the house. I can't wait for watching the movie 'Me Before You', we'll go to the cinema to watch it later.

Before we go to the cinema, we went to Saraiva ( a big bookstore ), and I'm so happy because my godmother gave me the collection of 'Outlander'. I love books.

And then, we went to the cinema. Wow, that movie is so beautiful, it's so nice and sad at the same time. I loved that movie, I cried a bit, but it's okay. Almost all the people who were in that cinema cried.

It's late here, I'm going to bed! ( I did only a few corrections but I'm not a native. Focus on the tenses that you're using and all the prepositions. However, you're doing very well, so keep going to improve your english. Well done.) 

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June 26/2016 Sunday

I was at the a "June Party" ( in Portuguese 'Festa Junina') -  the June Parties are parties held throughout the month of June to commemorate the saints John, Peter and/or Anthony. I like it them so much [I really like them]. I think the best Feasts are in Campina Grande, Caruaru and Salvador, I guess. But I've never been one of them, but I hope to I'll one day.

Anyway, I was at this party, but it was in house of a friend of my godmother. There iIt was very good! I didn't know almost no one barely knew anyone there, but even so they received me as if I were a friend.

In that party there was : hot punch made from cachaça ( quentão ), candy made of ground peanuts and sugar (paçoquinha), dish made made from grated corn and coconut, boiled with water, milk, sugar and cinnamon ( canjica ), cob, cakes and the more important, the joy.

[You could say "they had hot punch .... etc. ]

I don't know how to dance, I'm a disaster, but my uncle made me dance! It's was funny, and not bad.I really enjoyed so much that party [or: I enjoyed that party so much]. There It was funny, some women were was dresseds of like man men, and some men was dressed of woman were dressed like women.

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Very good ! Just a few small mistakes !


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Yeah, it was good! Thanks :)
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How fun a day!

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