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Yesterday I was at the beach! I live in of Spain north and it seem than isn't summer because sometimes it rains! Yesterday I went to beach with my husband because It was really sunny. So I put my bathing suit and I took my beach umbrella, my towel and my shades and I went to beach. I took ten minutes only, It's near. To have the beach near is fantantic because when I have some free time I arrive very fast and I am a beach bum in the summer. When I arrived I put cream in my body and my face because it is very important for I don't sunburn. At first, waves were good but after half hour started to make windy so I decided it return to house. I would like to go to beach tomorrow, I hope the weather is good!

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Yesterday I was at the beach!

I live in the north of Spain and it seems than isn't summer because sometimes it rains!

Yesterday I went to beach with my husband because It was really sunny. So I put my bathing suit on and I took my beach umbrella, my towel and my shades and I went to beach.

It took only ten minutes to get there because It's nearby. To have the beach near is fantantic because when I have some free time I arrive very fast and I am a beach bum in the summer.

When I arrived I put cream on my body and my face because it is very important that I don't sunburn. At first, waves were good but after half an hour it started to get windy so I decided to return to the house.

I would like to go to beach tomorrow, I hope the weather is good!
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Yesterday I was at the beach!

I live in of Spain north and it seem than isn't summer because sometimes it rains!

Yesterday I went to beach with my husband because It was really sunny. So I put my bathing suit and I took my beach umbrella, my towel and my shades and I went to beach.

I took ten minutes only, It's near. To have the beach near is fantantic because when I have some free time I arrive very fast and I am a beach bum in the summer.

When I arrived I put cream in my body and my face because it is very important for I don't sunburn. At first, waves were good but after half hour started to make windy so I decided it return to house.

I would like to go to beach tomorrow, I hope the weather is good!

Yesterday,  I was at the beach! (Correct)

I live in the north of Spain and it seems that it isn't summer because sometimes it rains!

Yesterday, I went to the beach with my husband because it was really sunny. So, I put on my bathing suit, got my beach umbrella, my towel and my shades and off we went.

It only took ten minutes to get there as the beach is close to where I live. Having the beach so near is fantastic because, when I have some free time, I can get there very quickly and I'm a beach bum in the summer!

When I arrived, I put sun cream on my face and body because I didn't want to get sunburnt. At first, the sea was quite calm but after half an hour, it  became windy so I decided to return home.

I would like to go to the beach tomorrow. I hope the weather will be good!


Very good Noelia! :)

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