Please correct this love letter!!
Hi people!! I found a beautiful love letter yesterday and I loved it so much that I decided to translate it in english.
I'm not bad at it but I found some difficulties (specially with the time of the verbs), so I hope someone will correct this.. Please!!
"Dear Sophie,
I'm loving another woman and I'm loving her with all that serenity you've never granted me. I understand now that love is this: line days of happiness not for force got with constant struggles. She's beautiful and coherent, the magic of the coherence is so amazing that I couldn't describe it; this spell has never managed to you. I'm fine, she has picked up my life and my head and she has matched everything, she has given sense and order to my home; she has been the place where I saved myself. There are days of sun and everyone says me I'm a new person and I also feel like I could eat clouds. I leave work earlier because I miss her too much sometimes and I need to see her; we meet everyday but only when I'm with her I don't think anything and I believe I colud save the world so understand me if I run to hug her as soon as possible everytime. I don't love you anymore and you don't love me anymore but I'm writing to you because when we meet I can see how you look at me and I can see how I look at you too. I don't love you anymore Sophie, but you remain the love of my life; there's only one love of the life and we've known it, loved it and then we've stopped missing it but you remain the love of my life; it's hard to make others understand but I dismount when I see you, I change eyes and heart, I return old, it lasts just a moment 'cause I, and you too, can't allow "us" anymore; but there's always that moment, like when I telephone you to know how you are, there's always that moment because you are the love of my life. The inconsistency/incoherence (what is better between them?), the struggles, the obstinacy.. I could stand all this with you and for you. If I have to describe love I talk about her, but if someone asks me about something beyond love I talk of you because you stay although I've stopped loving you a long time ago."
Thanks for reading!!
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Corrections · 2
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Sorry but what do you mean? You want me to post the letter in italian? :)
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Hello Anne! If you post the original letter here in the comments, I may be able to help you with the translation!
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