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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Preparing food today have improved, and became much easier as a result of science development. In fact, this improvement played a great role in enhancing the way of living in many aspects. But in the other hand it has a negative effects that we should care about.
In the past, the time that needed to cook a mail was long, while today food companies have created ready meals which only needs to be heated. Furthermore, many cooking machines are available today which not only save time, but also it save effort such as Microwave and rice cooking machine. This improvement is great as time is more valuable today.
Food contamination is an issue that was common before. Frequent handling of food and exposing it to low degree of temperature are the main sources of contamination. Today technologies have minimized the handling, and controlled the cooking temperature according to scientific knowledge and recommendations. Therefore, food today is more healthier with regard to contamination.
Finally, many people today suffer from certain diseases such as cancer and diabetes. Unfortunately, scientific researchers declared that our food contains chemical added substances which act as preservative. Some papers proofed that this chemical substances is one of the contributing factors that lead to such diseases. While others stated that this substances are generally unhealthy.
Overall, new technologies have improved our life style significantly. I think that we should take advantage of a new invention. But in the other hand we should be more careful about buying a natural healthy food as we can.
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