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申请中国的签证 如果你要申请去中国的签证，你因该办理手续。首先，你要填写一张申请表格。贴上一张证件照片。在表格上签字。你可以从网上下载申请表格，或者来大使馆。完成表格后你可以邮寄或者被递交。受理手续是两周。你通过书信或者电邮就知道要来领取。

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申请中国的签证

如果你您要申请去中国的签证，你因应该办理（相关）手续。首先，你您要填写一张申请表格。，贴上一张证件照片。之后在表格上并签字。你您可以从网上下载申请表格，或者来大使馆（领取）。完成表格后你您可以邮寄或者被递交（此表）。受理手续是需要两周。（签证受理完毕后），你通过书信或者电邮就知道要来领取，大使馆会通过邮件或电子邮件的形式来通知您领取护照。

Note: 

Parenthesis in blue background means it is not grammatically wrong without that parenthesis, but it would make more sense to include that.

Reminder:

1: In this case, based on your context, you need to be careful about your word choice. It seems to be a formal writing so use as much as  formal vocabs as possible. Like “受理”，“递交”， etc. DON'T MIX COLLOQUIAL VOCABS AND FORMAL VOCABS ALTOGETHER!!! If you are not confident to use academic vocabs, use colloquial vocabs. 

2. In this case, you are writing this in the voice of a embassy, so DON'T use “你”，go for “您” instead, it works well in every-day conversation, but frankly nah in formal writing.

3. Some grammar things:

   (1) 去 means go somewhere, and the object of 中国的签证 is 签证, not 中国.

   (2)被 is an indicator of passive voice.

4. In this case, I believe that embassy is responsible to inform visa applicants to get their passports not vice versa.

If you have any questions, feel free to contact me.


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申请中国的签证

如果你要申请去中国的签证，你因该办理手续。首先，你要填写一张申请表格。贴上一张证件照片。在表格上签字。你可以从网上下载申请表格，或者来大使馆。完成表格后你可以邮寄或者被递交。受理手续是两周。你通过书信或者电邮就知道要来领取。


如果你要申请去中国的签证，你需要先办理手续。首先，你要填写一张申请表格，同时贴上一张证件照。最后，在表格上签字。你可以从网上下载申请表格，或者到大使馆领取。完成表格后你可以选择邮寄或者递交。受理时间为两周。你将以书信或电邮的方式收到领取消息。

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申请中国的签证

如果你要申请去中国的签证，你应该办理手续。首先，你要填写一张申请表格。贴上一张证件照片。在表格上签字。你可以从网上下载申请表格，或者来大使馆。完成表格后你可以邮寄或者被递交。受理手续是两周。你通过书信或者电邮就知道要来领取了。
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申请中国的签证

如果你要申请去中国的签证，你应该了解办理手续。首先，你要填写一张申请表格。贴上一张证件照片。在表格上签字。你可以从网上下载申请表格，或者来大使馆。完成表格后你可以邮寄或者递交。
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申请中国的签证

如果你要申请去中国的签证，你因该应该办理手续。首先，你要填写一张申请表格。贴上一张证件照片。在表格上签字。你可以从网上下载申请表格，或者来大使馆。完成表格后你可以邮寄或者被（被 means by）递交。受理手续是两周。你通过书信或者电邮就知道要来领取。

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