My friends
Yesterday, I had the opportunity to my best friends againg after a long time no of seeing them.
We met in the small square next to the Public Library, we were quite happy. We spoke about many such as the process of peace in Colombia, our university , women and also our old choir.
We were part of the first generation of a choir named Levare Ictus, those times were the best of our lives because we met there for first time
Unfortunately we had to separate. Two of my friends stayed in the choir, another had to live in another city and I changed of university. In fact I changed my major from Art and Culture English and Spanish as I said in the previous written. (I am trying to learn it, English is quite difficult.)
Returning to the begining, yesterday we made our friendship stronger than before, It's quite refreshing to have friends who love one another.
After that, we began to play in the playground . hahahaha. the people around us said: Shame on you, because we seemed like a kids. It's good no lose the innocence.
TT(Crying) Sometimes happiness is not complete, our time finished, what a pity when friends must separate again.
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My friends
Yesterday I had the opportunity to see again to my best friends again, after a long time no see of not seeing them. (or, ..... to see my best friends, after not having seen them for a long time.)We met in the small square nearby to next to the Public Library. We was were quite happy. We spoke about many things such as the process of peace in Colombia, our university , women and also our ancient (ancient = anciano) choir.
We were part of the first generation of a choir named Levare Ictus, that times were the best of our lives those were the best days of our lives because we met there for first time (it was there that we met for the first time.)
Unfortunately we had to separate, two of my friends stayed in the choir, another had to live in another city and I changed of the university. In fact I changed my career from licentiate in Art and Culture to licentiate in English and Spanish as I said in the previous written (notebook?).
Returning to the begining, yesterday we made our friendship stronger than before. It's quite refreshing to have friends who love one another.
After that, we began to play in the playground . Jajajaja Hahahaha (English speakers won't understand "jajaja" unless they are familiar with Spanish). The people around us said: "Shame on you", because of we seemed acted like a kids. It's good no lost the innocence. (?)
TT (?) Sometimes the happiness is not complete, our time finished, what a pity when the friends must separate again.
Nice text, let me know if you have any uncertainties ;)
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My friends
Yesterday, I had the opportunity to see again to my best friends after a long time of not seeing them.We met in the small square nearby to thePublic Library, we was were quite happy. We spoke about many things such as the process of peace in Colombia, our university , women and also our ancient choir. (Is the choir old or finished (our old choir) or do you sing very old music (ancient choir)?
We were part of the first generation of a choir named Levare Ictus, that those times were the best of our lives because we met there for first time.
Unfortunately we had to separate. Two of my friends stayed in the choir, another had to live in another city and I changed of the universities. (You can also say "I transferred to another university.) In fact I changed my career major (in English "major" is la carrera que estudias y "career" is your professional working life) from licentiate in Art and Culture to licentiate in English and Spanish as I said in my the previous writtening.
Returning to the begining, yesterday we made our friendship stronger than before. It's quite refreshing to have friends who love one another. Awww :)
After we began to play in the playground . Jajajaja. the people around us said: Shame on you, because of we seemed like a kids. It's good not to lost lose the innocence.
TT Sometimes the happiness is not complete. our time finished. what a pity when the friends must separate again.
Nice job! It is always great to see old friends again.
For next time, I would recommend being careful about where you use a comma ',' and where you use a period '.' . Many Spanish speakers tend to use too many commas and not enough periods in their English writing. In English it is important to use a comma at the end of each complete thought.
Best wishes!
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