Introduce of myself
I am an university student ,and 22 years old .i come from China .
I like reading and studying , especically history and literacy ,sometimes novel and science . I do believe a knowledgable girl who is more atrctive and charming . i am outgoing and kind girl ,I like talking to anyone who is confident and friendly .
i like cooking too , i can fry vegetables and make dumpling. By thy way , i love to eat hotpot ,it is delicious pretty much .
i love sport too ,runnning ,youger. it keep me slim and healthy, as far as i am concerned ,i reakon that every should do exercise,it will be benefit both physical and mental .
Besides, i like sport match ,such as NBA . one years ago , i lke Laker , and Kobe Boyent , he has great shot .
Finally ,i hope you can help me correct mt fault , thanks . i can help you in learning Chinese too .
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Besides, i I like sports matches ,such as the NBA . one One years ago , i lke I liked the Lakers , and Kobe Boyent Bryant. , he He has a great shot .
Finally ,i I hope you can help me and correct mt my fault mistakes , thanks . i I can help you in learning to learn Chinese too .
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Introduction of myself
I am a university student, and I'm 22 years old. I come from China .I like reading and studying, especially history and literacy, sometimes novels and science. I do believe a knowledgeable girl who is more attractive and charming. I am an outgoing and kind girl, I like talking to anyone who is confident and friendly .
I like cooking too, I can fry vegetables and make dumplings. By thy way, I love to eat hotpot, it is delicious.
I love sports as well, such as running and yoga. It keeps me slim and healthy, as far as I am concerned, reckon everyone should do exercise, it will be beneficial both physically and mentally.
Besides, I like sports matches, such as NBA . I like the Lakers and Kobe Bryant , he has great shot.
Finally, I hope you can help me correct my faults, thanks. I can help you with learning Chinese too.
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Introduce of Introducing myself
I am an university student , [since the U in "university" starts with a "Y" sound, we say "a university"] and 22 years old . i I come from China .I like reading and studying , especically history and literacy literature , sometimes novels and science . I do believe a knowledgeable girl who is more atrctive attractive and charming . i I am an outgoing and kind girl ,I like talking to anyone who is confident and friendly .
i I like cooking too , i I can fry vegetables and make dumplings. By thy the way , i I love to eat hotpot ,it is pretty much delicious pretty much .
i I love sports too , such as runnning , and youger yoga. it It keeps me slim and healthy, and, as far as i I am concerned ,i reakon that everyone should do exercise. ,it It will be benefit provides both physical and mental benefits. [You can also say, "It keeps me slim and healthy, and I reckon that everyone should do exercise." "As far as I am concerned" and "I reckon" both refer to your opinion, so you don't need both phrases in this sentence. :-)]
[I've run out of space, so I'll correct the rest of the text in another comment!]
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