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新产品检验饮料是否被加入了毒品 一个来自英国的商人发明一个产品帮助检验饮料是否被加入了毒品。这可能发生如果一个人悄悄地加入毒品在其他人的杯子里。喝的人通常地失去自控力,并经常地遭受强奸、性侵或者盗窃。企业家Gary Bates发现了这个新产品名叫‘检验你的饮料’。这个小检验盒包括六张检验纸,这个纸浸入饮料启示是否饮料容纳经常用的毒品,比如克他命或者迷奸。这两个毒品也称为‘约会强奸毒品’因为它们让喝的人深入无意识的状态并破坏他们的记忆。 在全球上,饮料被加入毒品成为越来越大的问题,而且比很多人想象更经常。虽然多达百分之二十的受害者是男人,但是这个罪行特别涉及青年女人。在英国、美国、和澳大利亚进行的研究表明大约百分之十到百分之二十五的女性大学生买的饮料已经被加入毒品或者买了饮料后来被加入毒品。Bates先生劝告了所有对这些毒品感到忧虑的人。他说“我们的劝告是:‘别让你的饮料无人值守’。如果你担忧你的饮料被加入了毒品,我们的‘检验你的饮料’的检验盒就能让你省心。”这个产品不久要出现,一个检验箱的代价是大约1.65英镑。 New Product Tests for Spiked Drinks A British businessman has developed a product that helps people test drinks they think might have been drugged, or 'spiked'. This happens if one person slips drugs into the glass of another person. The drinker then loses self-control and is often the victim of rape, sexual assault or theft. The new product is called Test Your Drink and was invented by entrepreneur Gary Bates. It is a small kit that contains six sheets of test paper that you can dip into your drink to test for drugs that are commonly used to spike drinks, like Ketamine and GHB. Both these substances are also known as 'date rape drugs' as they put the drinker into a deep, unconscious state and disrupt their memories. Drink spiking is a growing problem across the world and is a lot more common than many people think. It is a particular concern for young women, although up to 20 per cent of victims are men. Studies in the UK, USA and Australia show that between 10 and 25 per cent of female college students have been bought a drink that was spiked or had a drink that someone spiked. Mr Bates had advice for anyone concerned about these predatory drugs. He said: "Our message is, 'Don't leave your drinks unattended'. If you are worried that something might have happened, [the Test Your Drink kit] will give you peace of mind." The product will soon be available to purchase at a price of approximately $1.65* per pack.

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一个位来自英国的商人发明了一个产品用来帮助检验饮料是否被加入了毒品。这可能发生如果一个人悄悄地加入毒品在其他人的杯子里。喝的人通常地会失去自控力,并极有可能遭受到强奸、性侵或者盗窃。企业家Gary Bates发明了这个新产品名叫‘检验你的饮料’这个小检验盒包括含六张检验纸,把纸浸入饮料启示检测是否含有容纳经常用的毒品,比如克他命或者迷奸。这两个毒品也称为‘约会强奸毒品’因为它们让喝的人深入无意识的状态并破坏他们的记忆。


在全球上,饮料被加入毒品投毒成为越来越大的问题,而且比很多人想象的更经常常见。虽然多达百分之二十的受害者是男人性,但是这个罪行特别涉及青年女人这个问题引起了许多年轻女性的广泛关注。在英国、美国、和澳大利亚进行的研究表明大约百分之十到百分之二十五的女性大学生买的饮料已经被加入毒品投毒或者买了饮料后来被加入毒品投毒。Bates先生劝告告诫所有对这些毒品感到忧虑的人。他说“我们的劝告是:‘别让你的饮料无人值守’。如果你担忧心你的饮料被加入了毒品投毒,我们的‘检验你的饮料’的检验盒就能让你省心。”这个产品不久要出现将即将问世,一个检验箱的代价是格大约是1.65英镑。

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新产品检验饮料是否被加入了毒品

一个来自英国的商人发明一个产品帮助检验饮料是否被加入了毒品。这可能发生如果一个人悄悄地加入毒品在其他人的杯子里。喝的人通常地失去自控力,并经常地遭受强奸、性侵或者盗窃。企业家Gary Bates发现了这个新产品名叫‘检验你的饮料’。这个小检验盒包括六张检验纸,这个纸浸入饮料启示是否饮料容纳经常用的毒品,比如克他命或者迷奸。这两个毒品也称为‘约会强奸毒品’因为它们让喝的人深入无意识的状态并破坏他们的记忆。

在全球上,饮料被加入毒品成为越来越大的问题,而且比很多人想象更经常。虽然多达百分之二十的受害者是男人,但是这个罪行特别涉及青年女人。在英国、美国、和澳大利亚进行的研究表明大约百分之十到百分之二十五的女性大学生买的饮料已经被加入毒品或者买了饮料后来被加入毒品。Bates先生劝告了所有对这些毒品感到忧虑的人。他说“我们的劝告是:‘别让你的饮料无人值守’。如果你担忧你的饮料被加入了毒品,我们的‘检验你的饮料’的检验盒就能让你省心。”这个产品不久要出现,一个检验箱的代价是大约1.65英镑。

首先,你的中文很好。但你的文章中出现了一些用词不恰当,语序颠倒的问题,不规范。

1、这可能发生在。你后面所说的都是一种情况。表示在这种情况中。

2、去掉“如果”,太复杂,与后面的文章保持一致,

3、“悄悄地加入毒品在其他人的杯子里”,语序错误,改为“悄悄地在其他人的杯子里加入毒品”。

4、通常地,去掉地,我们一般说“通常”。

5、启示,改为检测。

6、容纳:指空间概念。这个房间容纳50人。改为含有。

7、在全球,就可以了,去掉“上”。

8、经常,是一个频率词。改为普遍。commom.

9、特别设计 改为 更多涉及。

10、后来 改为 后

11、检验盒 改为 检验纸。你是用检验纸检验,不是检验盒。

12、出现 改为 问世,进入市场。

13、代价,较为夸张,贬义。直接用  价格。

       


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新产品检验饮料是否被加入了毒品

一个来自英国的商人发明了一个产品用来帮助检验饮料是否被加入了毒品。这可能发生产品用于如果一个人悄悄地加入毒品(投毒)在其他人的杯子里。喝的人通常地失去自控力,并经常地(并有很有可能)遭受强奸、性侵或者盗窃。企业家Gary Bates发现了这个新产品名叫‘检验你的饮料’。这个小检验盒包括六张检验纸,这个纸浸入饮料启示(提示)是否饮料有容纳经常用的毒品,比如克他命或者迷奸。这两个毒品也称为‘约会强奸毒品’因为它们让喝的人深入无意识的状态并破坏他们的记忆。

在全球上,饮料被加入毒品成为越来越大的问题,而且比很多人想象更经常。虽然多达百分之二十的受害者是男人,但是这个罪行特别涉及青年女人。在英国、美国、和澳大利亚进行的研究表明大约百分之十到百分之二十五的女性大学生买的饮料已经被加入毒品或者买了饮料后来被加入毒品。Bates先生劝告了所有对这些毒品感到忧虑的人。他说“我们的劝告是:‘别让你的饮料无人值守’。如果你担忧你的饮料被加入了毒品,我们的‘检验你的饮料’的检验盒就能让你省心。”这个产品不久就要出现,一个检验箱的代价(价格)是大约1.65英镑。

New Product Tests for Spiked Drinks

A British businessman has developed a product that helps people test drinks they think might have been drugged, or 'spiked'. This happens if one person slips drugs into the glass of another person. The drinker then loses self-control and is often the victim of rape, sexual assault or theft. The new product is called Test Your Drink and was invented by entrepreneur Gary Bates. It is a small kit that contains six sheets of test paper that you can dip into your drink to test for drugs that are commonly used to spike drinks, like Ketamine and GHB. Both these substances are also known as 'date rape drugs' as they put the drinker into a deep, unconscious state and disrupt their memories.

Drink spiking is a growing problem across the world and is a lot more common than many people think. It is a particular concern for young women, although up to 20 per cent of victims are men. Studies in the UK, USA and Australia show that between 10 and 25 per cent of female college students have been bought a drink that was spiked or had a drink that someone spiked. Mr Bates had advice for anyone concerned about these predatory drugs. He said: "Our message is, 'Don't leave your drinks unattended'. If you are worried that something might have happened, [the Test Your Drink kit] will give you peace of mind." The product will soon be available to purchase at a price of approximately $1.65* per pack.

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