30天中文写作挑战 (25/30) – 世界音乐节
昨天是六月二十一号，夏天第一天。
为了这个事件，法国人庆祝世界音乐节。
在八十年代，法国文化部长前Jack Lang创造了世界音乐节。
当今，人们在一百二十国家庆祝这个节。
在法国一切城市，街道里有很多人奏音乐。
我去看了一个同事弹了钢琴。
之后，我很朋友们漫步街头听了音乐。
Yesterday was "La fête de la musique" in France, so I wanted to talk a bit about it. I hope you will enjoy it! Thank you in advance for your help. Here is the English translation if needed :
Yesterday was the 21 of June, the first day of summer. For this event, French people celebrate the World Music Day. Jack Lang, a former French Minister of Culture, created the World Music Day in the eighties. Nowadays, people celebrate this festival in 120 countries. In every French city, the streets are full of people performing music. I went to watch one of my colleague play the piano. Later, me and my friends strolled along the streets listening to music.
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昨天是六月二十一号，夏天第一天。
昨天是六月二十一号，夏天的第一天。
为了这个事件，法国人庆祝世界音乐节。
这一天，法国人会庆祝世界音乐节。
在八十年代，法国文化部长前杰克朗创造了世界音乐节。
在八十年代，前法国文化部长杰克·朗创造了世界音乐节。
当今，人们在一百二十国家庆祝这个节。
当今，一百二十个国家的人们在庆祝这个节日。
在法国一切城市，街道里有很多人奏音乐。
在每一个法国的城市，街道里都有很多人弹奏音乐。
我去看了一个同事弹了钢琴。
我去看了一个同事弹奏钢琴。
之后，我很朋友们漫步街头听了音乐。
之后，我跟朋友们漫步街头，听了音乐。
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30天中文写作挑战 (25/30) – 世界音乐节
昨天是六月二十一号，夏天的第一天。每年的这一天，法国人都会举办世界音乐节。
在八十年代，法国前文化部长Jack Lang发起了世界音乐节。
今天，有来自世界一百二十个国家的人们在这里观看这个音乐节。
在法国每个城市，街道里都有很多人在演奏音乐。
我去看了一个同事演奏钢琴。
然后，我和朋友们在街头边漫步边享受音乐。
Yesterday was "La fête de la musique" in France, so I wanted to talk a bit about it. I hope you will enjoy it! Thank you in advance for your help. Here is the English translation if needed :
Yesterday was the 21 of June, the first day of summer. For this event, French people celebrate the World Music Day. Jack Lang, a former French Minister of Culture, created the World Music Day in the eighties. Nowadays, people celebrate this festival in 120 countries. In every French city, the streets are full of people performing music. I went to watch one of my colleague play the piano. Later, me and my friends strolled along the streets listening to music.
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30天中文写作挑战 (25/30) – 世界音乐节
昨天是六月二十一号，夏天第一天。为了这件事这个事件，法国人庆祝世界音乐节。
在八十年代，法国前文化部长前Jack Lang创办创造了世界音乐节。
当如今，人们在一百二十国家庆祝这个节。
在法国的每个一切城市，街道里有很多人奏音乐街上满是表演音乐的人。
我去看了一个同事弹了钢琴。
之后，我跟很朋友们漫步街头，听了音乐。
Yesterday was "La fête de la musique" in France, so I wanted to talk a bit about it. I hope you will enjoy it! Thank you in advance for your help. Here is the English translation if needed :
Yesterday was the 21 of June, the first day of summer. For this event, French people celebrate the World Music Day. Jack Lang, a former French Minister of Culture, created the World Music Day in the eighties. Nowadays, people celebrate this festival in 120 countries. In every French city, the streets are full of people performing music. I went to watch one of my colleague play the piano. Later, me and my friends strolled along the streets listening to music.
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30天中文写作挑战 (25/30) – 世界音乐节
昨天是六月二十一号，夏天第一天。
为了这个事件这件事，法国人庆祝世界音乐节。
在八十年代，法国前文化部长前Jack Lang创造了世界音乐节。
当如今，人们在一百二十国家庆祝这个节日。
在法国一切每一个城市，街道里都有很多人演奏音乐。
我去看了一个同事弹了钢琴。
之后，我很和朋友们漫步街头听了音乐。
Yesterday was "La fête de la musique" in France, so I wanted to talk a bit about it. I hope you will enjoy it! Thank you in advance for your help. Here is the English translation if needed :
Yesterday was the 21 of June, the first day of summer. For this event, French people celebrate the World Music Day. Jack Lang, a former French Minister of Culture, created the World Music Day in the eighties. Nowadays, people celebrate this festival in 120 countries. In every French city, the streets are full of people performing music. I went to watch one of my colleague play the piano. Later, me and my friends strolled along the streets listening to music.
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