June 21/2016 Tuesday
Usually I wake up at 8:00 a.m. , then I get up and I'll to bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face.
I leave the bathroom and I walk to the kitchen to have breakfast. So, I back to my bedroom and I make my bed.
After I change the clothe, I sit down in my chair, I look to my materials on the desk and I start study.
About 11:00 a.m. - 11:30 a.m., I start to make lunch, 12:00 a.m.- 12:30 p.m. the lunch is ready. Almost every day I eat beans, rice, salad, vegetables and any meat.
And then, I brush my teeth again. I clean the kitchen, the ground and I'm back to study.
At 5:00 p.m., I go out to run. When I'm back in home, I take a shower. I have snack while I watch news on tv.
I go back to study in my bedroom. Sometimes, I have a dinner or just a snack at night. Then, I go to bed and I write on my English diary. So, finally I sleep.
Today I woke up at 7:00 a.m. and I got up at 7:30 a.m., I went to bathroom, then I brushed my teeth and washed my face.
I went to kitchen to take breakfast, I went to tv room to eat bread and drank coffee while I was watching news on tv. I went back to kitchen and I washed my plate and my cup.
I went to back to my bedroom to make my bed and to study. At 11:30 p.m. I started to make lunch and at 12:30 I had my lunch while I was watching news on tv.
And then, I went to the kitchen and I cleaned it. I went to my bedroom and I went back to study. At 3:00 p.m., me and my uncle went to market to buy some things. The things are so expensive! Oh, God!
When I came back to home, I went back to study. Later, my uncle went to rehearse with their friends in their musical band. My uncle is a engineer, but currently he's unemployed. I hope he'll get a job in soon.
After my godmother arrived in home, we made soup. Yummy, I love soup! We took soup while we was watching tv. I wasn't to run today, because it was so cold.
Today I met a British guy on Italki, he needs help to learn Portuguese and I need help to learn English. So, I hope we can help each other, he looks be nice.
My uncle arrived in home, when he arrived here me and my godmother were watching a movie on tv, 'A possible dream' by Sandra Bullock. I love this movie, I already watched it twice.
Now it's so late here, I'm going to bed to sleep, I hope sleep in soon. I have some problems to sleep, insomnia, I hate it!
Can someone please correct me?
Thank you very much! :)
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June 21/2016 Tuesday
Usually I wake up at 8:00 a.m. , then I get up and I'll go to the bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face.
I leave the bathroom and I walk to the kitchen to have breakfast. Then So, I go back to my bedroom and I make my bed.
After I change the clothes, I sit down in my chair, I look at to my materials on the desk and I start to study.
About 11:00 a.m. - 11:30 a.m., I start to make lunch, 12:00 a.m.- 12:30 p.m. the lunch is ready. Almost every day I eat beans, rice, salad, vegetables and any meat.
And then, I brush my teeth again. I clean the kitchen, the floor ground and I'm back to studying.
At 5:00 p.m., I go out to run. When I'm back in home, I take a shower. I have a snack while I watch the news on tv.
I go back to study in my bedroom. Sometimes, I have a dinner or just a snack at night. Then, I go to bed and I write in on my English diary. Then So, finally I sleep.
Today I woke up at 7:00 a.m. and I got up at 7:30 a.m., I went to the bathroom, then I brushed my teeth and washed my face.
I went to the kitchen to have take breakfast, I went to the tv room to eat bread and drank coffee while I was watching the news on tv. I went back to the kitchen and I washed my plate and my cup.
I went to back to my bedroom to make my bed and to study. At 11:30 p.m. I started to make lunch and at 12:30 I had my lunch while I was watching the news on tv.
And then, I went to the kitchen and I cleaned it. I went to my bedroom and I went back to studying. At 3:00 p.m., me and my uncle went to the market to buy some things. The things were are so expensive! Oh, God!
When I came back to home, I went back to studying. Later, my uncle went to rehearse with his their friends in their musical band. My uncle is an engineer, but currently he's unemployed. I hope he'll gets a job in soon.
After my godmother arrived in home, we made soup. Yummy, I love soup! We had took soup while we were was watching tv. I didn't wasn't to run today, because it was so cold.
Today I met a British guy on Italki, he needs help to learning Portuguese and I need help to learning English. So, I hope we can help each other, he looks be nice.
My uncle arrived in home, when he arrived here me and my godmother were watching a movie on tv, 'A possible dream' by Sandra Bullock. I love this movie, I already watched it twice.
Now it's so late here, I'm going to bed to sleep, I hope to sleep in soon. I have some problems with to sleeping, insomnia, I hate it!
Can someone please correct me?
Thank you very much! :)
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Okay, thank you! I'll improve it.
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for those sentences which you are going to talk about future , to have variety in tens you can use the Modals, for instance:
[ I'll go to the bathroom => I would go to the bathroom ]
[ I go back to my bedroom => then I could get back to my bedroom ]
the tens are too important in English, they would give you an opportunity of which your speak will be being more beautiful.
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Can someone please correct me?
Thank you very much! :)
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