Environment II
Today, I´m worry about the problem with environment because I believe that our world is suffering great dangerous. But, also I believe that I and you can do a lot of things to salve this problems.
How I could held the earth?
On first all, I use the three "r", recycle, reduce and reuse:
I recicle my rubbish, I separate the trash on three containers, one containers for plastic, other container for paper, and a third for organic material. I reuse clothes and furnitures. Finally, I try to reduce the use of electric energy and water.
On the one hand, I use my bycicle to go to everywhere so I don´t take my car. Also I walk or take a public transport. This form, I don´t earn petrol and don´t pollute with the car.
Another way to help is cooperating with a green organization such as Greenpeace or save the forest.
Theses are some examples about help to save environment, but there are a lot of forms to do it. However, I believe that this problem has to solution of Governments The environment is a common and serious problem. The are a lot of interests in play.
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Environment II
Today, I´m worrying about the problem with the environment because I believe that our world is suffering great dangerous. But, also I believe that I and you (better: you and I (or we)) can do a lot of things to solve this problems. (or: these problems)How I could I help the earth?
On First of all, I use the three "r", recycle, reduce and reuse:
I recycle my rubbish. I separate the trash on into three containers, one containers for plastic, another container for paper, and a third for organic material. I reuse clothes and furnitures. Finally, I try to reduce the use of electric energy (or: electricity) and water.
On the one hand, I use my bicycle to go to everywhere so I don´t take my car. Also I walk or take a public transport. This form way, I don´t earn use petrol and don´t pollute with the car.
Another way to help is cooperating with a green organization such as Greenpeace or Save the Forest. (you would want to capitalize an organization’s name)
Theses are some examples about helping to save the environment, but there are a lot of forms (or: ways) to do it. However, I believe that this problem has to be a solution of (or: from) governments. (You could also write: However, I believe that governments must provide the solution to environmental problems.) The environment is a common and serious problem. The are a lot of interests in play.
Nicely written Jaime!
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