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Butterfly Grave(나비무덤), one of my favorite K-pop song One of my favorite K-pop song is "나비무덤" by 테이크. I've ever heard it before but I didn't know the title. I found out the title because recently one of my friends sang it at a karaoke. After that, I've been listening to it so far. "나비무덤" is both so sweet and touching. Have a listen to it! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4um1JDxviKA

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Butterfly Grave(나비무덤), one of my favorite K-pop songs

One of my favorite K-pop songs is "나비무덤" by 테이크. I've never heard it before but so I didn't know the title. I found out the title because recently when one of my friends sang it at a karaoke. After that, I've been listening to it so far constantly.  "나비무덤" is both so sweet and touching. Have a listen to it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4um1JDxviKA

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you need the "s" when you say "one of my favorite Kpop songS" because you are talking about one song out of many Kpop songs.  It is an English idiom.  "one of my favorite foods," "one of my clean shirts," "one of my favorite people," etc..

"I've never heard it..." is also an idiom.  I also changed "but" to "so" because it is a cause and effect (use "so" : 그래서) not a contrast (use "but" : 하지만).  "I got a job so now I have no time to play" versus "I got a job but I still have time to play."

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Butterfly Grave(나비무덤), one of my favorite K-pop song.

One of my favorite K-pop song is "나비무덤" by 테이크. I've heard it before, but I didn't know its name.

I came to know the song's name when  one of my friends sang it at a karaoke recently .

After that, I've been listening to it very often.

"나비무덤" is such a sweet and touching song . Have a listen to it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4um1JDxviKA

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