About weather
This very hot in Shenzhen recently.
When I outdoor I will bring my sunshine umbrella.
It's very popular in China.
When we go home, we will use air-condition make our room cooling.
I hope will raining someday in future.
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About the Weather
It has been very hot in Shenzhen recently.When I go outdoors, I take my sunshine umbrella with me.
It's very crowded in China.
When we go home, we turn on our air-conditioner to make our room cooler.
I hope it will rain soon.
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About the weather
It's been very hot in Shenzhen recently.When I go out, I take my sunshine umbrella.
(When you say it is very popular, do you mean the rain umbrella? Or that China is heavily populated (busy, crowded))??
When we go home, we use air conditioning to make our room cooler.
I hope it rains here soon.
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