In the morning.
Every in the morning, I forced get up because my cats " star" and " shining" woke me up.
I want to asleep untill 8am but they woke me up 6 am.
So, get up and I do my best for them what they want to everything.
The time attend to office untill 9 am and it takes 30min to office so I leave 8:30
On my way to office I listen to radio or BIBLE and pray.
How about yours?
Thank you for reading.
Please~let me know if I did something wrong.
And make full sentences.
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Accidentally sent the wrong one. This is how it should sound.
In the morning.
Every time in the morning, I am forced to get up because of my cats, Star and Shining, wake me up.I want to sleep in until 8 am, but they wake me up at 6 am.
So, I get up and I do my best to give them everything they want.
The time I have to be at the office is not until 9 am and it takes 30 minutes to get to the office so I leave at 8:30.
On my way to the office I listen to the radio or the Bible and then pray.
How about you?
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In the morning.
Every morning I am forced get up because my cats, Star and Shining, wake me up.I want to sleep until 8 am, but they wake me up 6 am.
So I get up and I do my best for them. I do everything they want.
The time I need to be at the office is 9 am and it takes 30 minutes to get to the office, so I leave 8:30
On my way to office I listen to the radio or the BIBLE and pray.
How about yours?
Thank you for reading.
Please~let me know if I did something wrong.
And make full sentences.
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In the morning.
Every in the morning, I am forced to get up because my cats " Star" and " Shining" woke wake me up.I want to asleep untill until 8 am but they woke wake me up at 6 am.
So, I get up and I do my best for them. I do everything they want.
The time attend to I must be in the office by 9 am, and it takes 30 min to get to the office, so I leave at 8:30
On my way to the office, I listen to the radio or to the BIBLE and pray.
How about yours?
Thank you for reading.
Please~let me know if I did something wrong.
And Make full sentences.
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Hey Lani! I just wanted to comment on your notebook entry and let you know you did a good job. I just had a couple thoughts about proper nouns (like names). The section where you talk about your cats, you don't need to put them in parentheses. Just capitalize them like you would with a person's name. Also, I had a little bit of a hard time understanding the sentence "The time to attend to the office until 9 am...", but it sounds like you're talking about what time you need to be at work. The word "attend" shows the idea that you need to be somewhere. You can write "The time I need to be at the office is 9 am...", instead. Hopefully these comments are understandable. Keep up the good work!
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In the morning.
Every in the morning, I forced get up because my cats " star" and " shining" woke me up.I want to asleep untill 8am but they woke me up 6 am.
So, get up and I do my best for them what they want to everything.
The time attend to office untill 9 am and it takes 30min to office so I leave 8:30
On my way to office I listen to radio or BIBLE and pray.
How about yours?
Thank you for reading.
Please~let me know if I did something wrong.
And make full sentences.
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