To Be Continued...
She stopped for a while to change the song she was listening to, it was an old song, but it still her favorite one: "the reason why I said I'm all alone is because while I was reading I felt like the time has stopped, like I entered the story and started living characters' lifes with them. Suddenly, I can feel someone touching me, someone calling me and speaking to me. It was her, the girl sitting behind the girl who was sitting next to my left. She asked me about the novel I was reading, and while I was explaining, the girl sitting next to my left joined the conversation. Well, the talk was a little bit long, so let's just skip it, the important thing is that we found many common things between us, and that's how it started... The moment I've been looking for... The thing I've been waiting for... Now I can call them 'my friends' ".
After taking a short glance at her book, she wrote: " the first meeting" then she closed it, turned off the light and went to bed.
She is asleep.
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To Be Continued...
She stopped for a while to change the song she was listening to. It was an old song, but it was still her favorite one: "The reason why I said I'm all alone is because while I was reading I felt like the time had stopped, like I had entered the story and started living the characters' lives lives with them. Suddenly, I can feel felt someone touching me, someone calling me and speaking to me. It was her she, (Subject pronouns are often used in formal English when they rename the subject - in this case, "the girl". They follow verbs such as is, are, was, were, am, will be, had been, etc. In everyday English writing "she" in this case is tolerated more and more, though it's technically often not correct) the girl sitting behind the girl who was sitting next to my left. She asked me about the novel I was reading, and while I was explaining, the girl sitting next to my left joined the conversation. Well, the talk chat/discussion was a little bit long, so let's just skip it. The important thing is that we found many common things in common between us, and that's how it started.... The moment I've been looking for... The thing I've been waiting for... Now, I can call them 'my friends' ".After taking a short glance at her book, she wrote, "The first meeting", then she closed it, turned off the light and went to bed.
She is asleep.
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yes they do help a lot :) thank you
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Well done. I hope my comments help you!
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