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Yeaterday, my mother and I went outside after cleaning up our house. We have been looking forward to going to NUNOBIKI Herb Garden. This facility located in the top of Mt.Rokko.
Despite the rainy season in Japan, it was sunny with some clouds fortunately.
I drove my mother's car myself to the gondola lift station. And we got in the gondola. I had never done this before, I think.
I was a little scared, but the view from the gondola was so amazing !
As soon as we had arrived the top of the mountain we had lunch. Because we were so hungry.
We ate a lot of herb cuizines and enjoyed the lunch.
After the lunch, we walked around the herb garden and saw many different kinds of herbs.
We had a great time ! I want to go back again !
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first experience
Yesterday, my mother and I went outside after cleaning up our house. We have been looking forward to going( to go) to NUNOBIKI Herb Garden. This facility located in the top of Mt.Rokko.Despite the rainy season in Japan, it was sunny with some clouds fortunately.
I drove my mother's car myself ( you already said that you were the one who drove the car, so there is no need to add myself) to the gondola lift station. And (try not to start a new sentence with "and" )we got in the gondola. I had never done this before, I think.
I was a little ( you can add "bit" to make it sound more beautiful, so it becomes like this " a little bit scared" ) scared, but the view from the gondola was so amazing !
As soon as we had arrived ( it's better to use the past simple since the events are in a chronological order, so it becomes like this " we arrived" ) to the top of the mountain we had lunch. Because we were so hungry.
We ate a lot of herb cuizines and enjoyed the lunch.
After the lunch, we walked around the herb garden and saw many different kinds of herbs.
We had a great time ! I want to go back again !
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first experience
Yesterday, my mother and I went outside after cleaning up our house. We have been looking forward to going to NUNOBIKI Herb Garden. This facility is located at the top of Mt.Rokko.Despite the rainy season in Japan, it was sunny with some clouds fortunately.
I drove my mother's car myself to the gondola lift station. And we got on the gondola. I had never done this before, I think.
I was a little scared, but the view from the gondola was so amazing !
As soon as we had arrived the top of the mountain we had lunch as we were so hungry.
We ate a lot of herb cuisines and enjoyed the lunch.
After the lunch, we walked around the herb garden and saw many different kinds of herbs.
We had a great time ! I want to go back again !
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