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Stop comparing We like to compare with others. Almost everyone like to compare with others. You see someone's mobile phone. It is a cutting edge product. Its display is shape. It has the world's fastest CPU. Its figure is beautiful. It is light and thin. It is made by a world-class brand. You think that the mobile phone is awesome. You hold your mobile phone in your hand. You think that your mobile phone like a tank when compared with the phone. Your mobile phone is heavy and thick. It is old and out of date. Its display is broken. Its figure is weird. You want to throw it away immediately. When you start to compare with others, you are setting up a snare for yourself. You make yourself unhappy. You let yourself down. In most cases, it is hard to make a rational comparison. Maybe you compare your weaknesses with someone strong points. This comparison is totally meaningless. The more important is that you can't change anything at all. You are just annoying yourself and make you feel worse. (Thank you in advance for correcting my grammar mistakes. )

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Stop comparing

We like to compare with ourselves to others. Almost everyone likes to compare with themselves to others. You see someone's mobile phone (you don't have to say "mobile," it is usually implied; phone and cell phone are more commonly said). It is a cutting edge product. Its display is shape shaped (I'm not sure what you meant here but perhaps it is shaped). It has the world's fastest CPU. Its figure is beautiful. It is light and thin. It is made by a world-class brand. You think that the mobile phone is awesome. You hold your mobile phone in your hand. You think that your mobile phone is like a tank when compared with the phone. Your mobile phone is heavy and thick. It is old and out of date. Its display is broken. Its figure is weird. You want to throw it away immediately. When you start to compare with it to others, you are setting up a snare for yourself. You make yourself unhappy. You let yourself down. In most cases, it is hard to make a rational comparison. Maybe you compare your weaknesses with someone's strong points. This comparison is totally meaningless. The more most important thing is that you can't change anything at all. You are just annoying yourself and make you making yourself feel worse.

(Thank you in advance for correcting my grammar mistakes. )
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Stop comparing

Almost everyone likes to compare themselves with others. You see someone else's mobile phone. It is a cutting edge product. Its display and its shape are amazing. It has the world's fastest CPU.  It is light and thin. It is made by a world-class brand (or it's a name brand). You think that the mobile phone is awesome. You hold your mobile phone in your hand. You think that your mobile phone is like a tank when compared with the other phone. Your mobile phone is heavy and thick. It is old and out of date. Its display is broken. It has a weird shape. You want to throw it away immediately. When you start to compare it with others, you are setting up a snare for yourself. You make yourself unhappy and work yourself up.  In most cases, it is hard to make a rational comparison. Maybe you compare your weaknesses with someone else's strong points. This comparison is totally meaningless. The more important thing to consider is that you can't change anything at all. You are just annoying yourself and making yourself feel worse.

(Thank you in advance for correcting my grammar mistakes. )
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Cathy Xu, thank you so much. You are right.
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I thought maybe you want use the word "sharp" instead of "shape".

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