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hi ^^
today in my city it was sunny and clear but little hot, i woke up at 7 o'clock and prepared myself to go to visit my friend ,so i took the bus, and went to him, but he was little lazy he didnt wake up early ^^ ,so i waited him but when he came he makes the time so fun, it was a nice day ,next time i will take him and go to the park and make a lot of pictures,, i am trying to write what i did today , i hope i didn't make a lot mistakes and you understand me , thanks ^^
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today
hi ^^today in my city it was sunny and clear but a little hot, i woke up at 7 o'clock and prepared myself to go to visit my friend ,so i took the bus, and went to him, but he was little lazy he hadn't woken didn't wake up early ^^ ,so i waited for him but when he came he made makes the time so fun, it was a nice day ,next time i will take him and go to the park and take make a lot of pictures,, i am trying to write what i did today , i hope i didn't make a lot mistakes and you understand me , thanks ^^
it was really easy to understand, those are just a couple of small corrections :)
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