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My Dad My Dad the best in my life. He is the most patient, lovely and amazing person in my world. He is always there for me doing his best and always wants the happiness of me and my family. He is the strongest and worker man that I have ever met in life. He inspires me to be better each day because he gives me confidence and a great motivation on my road to success. However, the way that he faces to life each day makes him really become in a hero in my heart. My father is a normal man in the world but in my heart is a hero. He sacrificed him each day to the happiness of my big brothers my mom and me. When I have in troubles, the strength of my Dad and his power inspires me to overcome the difficulties. One of the things that I admire of my father most is that he always keep in his mind a positive thought and is always with a smile on his face no matter what but he is always smiling bringing us happiness. So for all the things that my Dad have done for me I have promise to myself become a successful and a happy person as my father wishes.

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My Dad

My Dad the best in my life. He is the most patient, lovely and amazing person in my world.
He is always there for me doing his best and always wants the happiness for me and my family.
He is the strongest and most hardworking man that I have ever met in my life. He inspires me to be better each day because he gives me confidence and a great motivation on my road to success.
However, the way that he faces to life each day makes him really become in a hero in my heart.
My father is a normal man to the world but in my heart is a hero. He sacrificed himself each day for the happiness of my big/older brothers my mom and me.
When I am in troubles, the strength of my Dad/(better: my dads strength) and his power inspires me to overcome the difficulties.
One of the things that I admire of/about my father the most is that he always keeps in his mind a positive thought and is always with a smile on his face (or better: he always wear a smile on his face) no matter what, but/so his smiles brings us happiness.
So for all the things that my Dad have done for me, I have promised to myself become a successful and a happy person as my father wishes.


great work :D 

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My Dad

My dad is the best of my life. He is (better: I can describe him as) the most patient, lovely and amazing person in my world.
He is always there for me doing his utmost and always wants the happiness for me and my family.
He is the strongest and most hardworking man that I have ever met in my life. He inspires me to be better each day because he gives me confidence and a great motivation on my way to success.
However, the way that he faces to life each day makes him really become in a hero in my heart.
My father is a normal man to the world but in my heart is a hero to me. He has sacrificed himself each day for the happiness of my older brothers, my mom and me.
When I get into troubles, the strength of my dad and his power inspires me to overcome the difficulties.
One of the things that I admire of my father the most is that he always keeps in his mind a positive thought and smiles no matter what happens and his smiles bring us happiness.
So for all the things that my Dad have done for me I have promised to myself become a successful and a happy person as my father wishes.


Excellent description! Kudos to your father!

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