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I will be the representitive of my department in the college graduation day, so I truly appreciate someone who can correct my words. thank you.
It is amazing that all of us will graduate from here, from Fu Jen University, from the department of English language and literature. Unbelievable, right? For starters, I am grateful to my classmates, because of you, I love studying in Fu Jen. As a transformed student, I was afraid of having no friends, to a certain degree, when I was a sophomore, but actually no. I would like to say that I make a lot of friends here that I truly appreciate. Being with you guys is wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Especially when we prepared the graduation play last year and every time we needed to stay over together for studying works of literature. Secondly, I would want to represent all the graduates to thank all of our professors. Because of our professors, we were able to gain knowledge and study more things that were out of books as well. It is utterly rare that we could study in the same department and met each other here, so that’s why we must cherish this relationship. Finally, I wish all the graduates can find what you like and strive to achieve your dreams.
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please give me a hand
I will be the representitive of my department in the college graduation day, so I truly appreciate someone who can correct my words. thank you.It is amazing that all of us are graduating from here, Fu Jen University, from the department of English language and literature. Unbelievable, right? For starters, I am grateful to my classmates. Because of you, I love studying in Fu Jen. As a transfer student, I was afraid of having no friends. I particularly felt it when I was a sophomore, but actually no. I am delighted to say that I made lots of friends here that I truly appreciate. Being with you guys is wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Especially when we prepared the graduation play last year and every time we needed to stay over together for studying literature. Secondly, on behalf of my fellow graduates, I would like to thank all our professors. Because of our professors, we were able to gain knowledge and study more than what simply comes out of books. It is truly rare that we could study in the same department and meet each other here. That is why we must cherish this relationship. Finally, I wish all my fellow graduates the very best in finding what you like and in striving to achieve your dreams.
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please give me a hand
I will be the representitive of my department in the college graduation day, so I truly appreciate someone who can correct my words. thank you.It is amazing that all of us will graduate from here, from Fu Jen University, from department of English language and literature. Unbelievable, right? For starters, I am grateful to my classmates, because of you, I love studying in Fu Jen. As a transform student, I was afraid of having no friends, to a certain degree, when I was a sophomore, but actually no. I would like to say that I make a lot of friends here that I truly appreciate. Being with you guys is wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Especially when we prepared the graduation play last year and every time we needed to stay over together for studying literatures. Secondly, I would want to represent all the graduates to thank all of our professors. Because of our professors, we were able to gain knowledge and study more things that were out of books as well. It is utterly rare that we could study in the same department and met each other here, so that’s why we must cherish this relationship. Finally, I wish all the graduates can find what you like and strive to achieve your dreams.
This is actually not bad. See below, if I will be writing your speech:
It is amazing that all of us will graduate from Fu Jen University's Department of English Language and Literature. Unbelievable right? First and foremost, I am grateful to all my classmates, because of you I loved studying in Fu Jen (or you can use: because of you I loved studying here). As a transfer student during our sophomore year, I was afraid/scared of not having and making any friends. Fortunately, that was not the case, in fact I made a lot of friends during my stay here. Being with you guys is wonderful -- absolutely wonderful. One of the things that I won't forget was the time when were preparing the graduation play last year. Another unforgettable memory was from the times the we needed to stay late and have overnight sessions together to study for our literature class. Those are the times that I will cherish even after graduation. Secondly, if all the graduates will permit it, I would like to represent all of the graduates to give thanks to all our professors, because of you we gained knowledge and you were able to impart to us things that are not written in the books. It is utterly rare to study in the same department and meet each and everyone one of you and we will treasure this relationship that we have built over the years. And finally, to my fellow graduates, I hope the you can find what you truly love and strive to achieve your dreams and goals.
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please give me a hand
I will be the representitive of my department in the college graduation day, so I truly appreciate someone who can correct my words. thank you.It is amazing that all of us will graduate from here, we are all graduating from Fu Jen University, from in the department of English language and literature. Unbelievable, right? For starters, I am grateful I feel a lot of gratitude towards to my classmates. Because of you, I loved studying in Fu Jen. As a transform sophomore transfer student, I was afraid that I would not make any friends. of having no friends, to a certain degree, when I was a sophomore, but actually no. Instead, I would like to say that I make I made a lot of friends here that I truly appreciate, and all of you have touched my life in some way or another. Being with my colleagues has been is wonderful. -- absolutely wonderful! I have special memories of preparing Especially when prepared the graduation play last year, as well as and every time we needed to stay overnight together for to study studying literatures. In addition, I would want to represent all of the graduates in thanking to thank all of our professors. Because of our professors you, we were able to gain more knowledge and study more things that were out outside of book learning as well. It is utterly rare that we could study in the same department and met each other here, so that’s why We must cherish our relationships, because sharing these specific experiences is a rare gift. this relationship. Finally, I wish hope all of the graduates can find what you like and continue on the path strive to achieve your dreams, as our graduation from Fu Jen University is a special accomplishment.
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please give me a hand
I will be the representative of my department on college graduation day, so I would truly appreciate if someone would correct my words. thank you.It is amazing that all of us will graduate from here, from Fu Jen University, from the department of English language and literature. It's unbelievable, right? For starters, I am grateful to my classmates. Because of you, I love studying in Fu Jen. As an exchange student*, I was afraid of having no friends, to a certain degree, when I was a sophomore, but actually no. I would like to say that I made a lot of friends here that I truly appreciate. Being with you guys is wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Especially when we prepared the graduation play last year and every time we needed to stay over together to study literature. Secondly, on behalf of all the graduates I would like to thank all our professors. Because of our professors, we were able to gain knowledge and study more things than are just found in books, too. It is very rare that we could study in the same department and meet one another, so that’s why we must cherish this relationship. Finally, I wish that all you graduates will find what you want and will strive for your dreams.
*you went to Fu Jen University and another student went from Fu Jen to your old University? (You both would be 'exchange students' then).
Very well written!
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