My pets
My father like the animals a lot. When he was a child he had a home in the country, so your parents had many animals there. I don't live in the countryside, I live in the town but I have luck of I live in big house where we have many animals who are two black dogs of breed Labrador Retriever, both are females, a small tortoise, a squirrel, a black rabbit, two hare very pretties, a parrot that sometime he speaks, two magpie very noisy and other a lot kinds of birds more usual.
When I was a child in my house we had other dog, many fish, a frog, two white rabbits, birds and two pheasant.
Having pets require much responsibility and commitment. I am glad have had all these pets in my life.
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My pets
My father likes the animals a lot. When he was a child, he had a home in the country. So, our parents had many animals there. I don't live in the countryside, I live in the town but I have the luck of living in a big house, where we have many animals. who are The animals we have, include; two female black dogs of breed Labrador Retrievers, both are females, a small tortoise, a squirrel, a black rabbit, two very pretty hares very pretties, a parrot that sometime he speaks, two very noisy magpies very noisy and other a lot of other kinds of unusual birds more usual. (Did you mean 'unusual birds'?)
When I was a child, in my house, we had another dog, many fish, a frog, two white rabbits, birds and two pheasants. Having pets require much responsibility and commitment. I am glad to have had all these pets in my life.
Well written, but in English, the adjectives usually appear after the nouns. Great job! =)
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My pets
My father like the animals a lot. When he was a child he had a home in the countryside (or you can say: he was staying in the countryside), so your parents had many animals there (sorry not sure what you want to say here). I don't live in the countryside, I live in the town but I have the luck of I living in a big house where we have many animals: who are two black dogs of the breed Labrador Retriever, both are females; a small tortoise, a squirrel, a black rabbit, two very pretty hares, a parrot that sometimes he speaks, two very noisy magpie and other a lot kinds of more usual birds.When I was a child in my house we had other dogs (if only 1, then you may use we had a dog), many fishes, a frog, two white rabbits, birds and two pheasant.
Having pets require much responsibility and commitment. I am glad have had all these pets in my life.
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