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Report INTRODUCTION The aim of this report is to: -Provide information about the studies young people do after leaving school -Analise the kind of jobs young people do after they leave school -Explain the sources I got the information from STUDIES YOUNG PEOPLE DO AFTER LEAVING SCHOOL The economic situation in my country is not good at the moment, which means there are few job vacances for too many people unemployed. The better the curriculum, the more possibilities to get a job are. Being in this situation, young people are forced to study more after leaving the school if they want to get a job. Therefore, students usually do a master after having finished their degrees or try to learn a new language, which the objective of having more chances to get the job they want. KINDS OF JOBS YOUNG PEOPLE DO AFTER LEAVING SCHOOL Young people usually do a training during or after leaving school. This training is frequently done in big companies, which are aware of how competitive is the job market and try to take advance of the situation by paying a little money to the trainees. Even worse, sometimes they do not pay anything, especially when the training is part of the course. WHERE I GOT THE INFORMATION FROM The main source where I got this information is my own experience. In spite of having studied law for six years and studying English, I still have problems to find a proper job in my country. My situation is not isolate and I met a lots of students which are in the same situation as me, working in another country or studying a Master, just to have more chances to get a job. CONCLUSION The economic crisis is reflected on the job opportunities. Young people need to be more and more prepared if they want to highlight on the job interviews. In my opinion it is unfair for all the students that have recently finished their degrees and the government should help to improve the current situation and stop “free-training” jobs.

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INTRODUCTION

The aim of this report is to:

-Provide information about the studies young people do after leaving school
-Analyse the kind of jobs young people do after they leave school
-Explain the sources I got the information from

STUDIES YOUNG PEOPLE DO AFTER LEAVING SCHOOL

The economic situation in my country is not good at the moment, which means there are few job vacances for too many people unemployed. The better the curriculum, the more possibilities to get a job are. Being in this situation, young people are forced to study more after leaving the school if they want to get a job. Therefore, students usually do a master's after having finished their degrees or try to learn a new language, which with the objective of having more chances to get the job they want.

KINDS OF JOBS YOUNG PEOPLE DO AFTER LEAVING SCHOOL

Young people usually do a some training (or do a training course) during or after leaving school. This training is frequently done in big companies, which who are aware of how competitive is the job market is and try to take advance advantage of the situation by paying a little money to the trainees. Even worse, sometimes they do not pay anything, especially when the training is part of the course.

WHERE I GOT THE INFORMATION FROM

The main source where I got this information from is my own experience. In spite of having studied law for six years and studying English, I still have problems to find (better: still have problems finding) a proper job in my country. My situation is not isolated and I met a lots (or met lots) of students which who are in the same situation as me, working in another country or studying a Master's, just to have more chances to get (or of getting) a job.

CONCLUSION

The economic crisis is reflected on in the job opportunities. Young people need to be more and more prepared if they want to highlight on the stand out in job interviews. In my opinion it is unfair for all the students that have (better: who have) recently finished their degrees and the government should help to improve the current situation and stop “free-training” jobs.

 

Excellently written Veronica! Perhaps a little bit of revision on which/who before your exam ;-)


My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

 

students usually do a master's - "A master's" is short for "a master's degree". It's very common to refer to it simply as "a master's".

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