I love my cat
my friend say me that a neighbor her gift cats so I wanted have a cat I went where lived she and I speak with her neighbor and she surprince me because she allow I take her cat most beautiful that she had And since that moment I was the hapiest because I had a cat so I always wanted, my cat was white wih lot of locks it's name was nube until a day it's out in the night and I lost it now I'm so sad for this now I have other cat it's name is niño.
I hope it is understandable
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I love my cat
my friend TOLD me that a HER neighbor GIVES AWAY cats. I wanted to have a cat SO I went where SHE lived and I SPOKE with her neighbor and she SURPRISED me because she ALLOWED ME TO take her MOST BEAUTIFUL cat that she had and since that moment I was the happiest because I had a cat LIKE I always wanted, my cat was white with a lot of locks(No se lo que son "locks") it's name was nube. After one day it got out at night and I lost it, now I'm so sad, now I have a new cat, it's name is niño.I hope it is understandable
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I loved my cat
Since I wanted to have a cat, my friend told me that a neighbor gave away cats. One day I went and spoke with her neighbor and she surprised me because she allowed me to take her cat, the most beautiful one that she had. At that moment I was the happiest person because I had a cat that I always wanted. My cat was white with lot of fur. It's name was Nube but one day it ran out at the night and it got lost. I was so sad. But now I have another cat and it's name is Niño.I hope it is understandable (I hope my notebook is understandable)
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I love my cat
My friend said to me that a neighbor had cats. I wanted to have a cat so I went to where she lived and I spoke with her neighbor. She surprised me because she allowed me to take the most beautiful cat that she had. Since (or after) that moment, I was the happiest person because I had the cat that I always wanted. My cat was white with a lot of locks (long hair?). It's name was Nube until one day it got out in the night and I lost it. Now I'm so sad about this. Now I have another cat whose name is Niño.I hope it is understandable.
Hi Milene,
Yes! I understood your story. :) I'm sorry to hear that you lost your cat. That is very sad. Hopefully you love your new cat Niño as much as you loved your old cat Nube.
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