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The examination which called 高考 has finished,and now l am free! In my coming holiday, l have so many exciting things to do.l will learn to drive.l know the senior high school students especially in America can drive cars to school themselves,but in China it's impossible!!
l am eager to drive,that must be cool
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PLEASE HELP ME CORRECT IT, Thank YOU[emoji][emoji]
The examination which called 高考 has finished, and now l am free! In my coming holiday, l have so many exciting things to do. l will learn to drive. l know (that) senior high school students, especially in America, can drive cars to school themselves, but in China it's impossible!!l am eager to drive, that must be cool
٩(๑`н´๑)۶(like a kid's article[emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji])
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Remember, after a comma ( , ) or period ( . ) you need to use a space.
When I was in high school I drove myself to school, but I think most students take the bus. I think taking the bus is better because it doesn't cause so much CO2 emission. I only drove because I had a job after school.
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PLEASE HELP ME CORRECT IT,Thank YOU[emoji][emoji]
The examination which called 高考 has just finished, and now l am free! In my coming holidays, l have so many exciting things that i want to do. l will learn to drive. l know the senior high school students especially in America can drive cars to school themselves, but in China, it's impossible!!l am eager to drive, that must be so cool .
٩(๑`н´๑)۶(like a kid's article[emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji])
Great job, 加油。
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