My roommate write an airticle about a terrible thing in her life.
There is one thing I can’t forget in my life. One day, I try to acrossed the intersection which is a traffic light near my home. I saw the light is red but I acrossed the road because I can’t wait the light turn to green, I think it will waste my time. I remember there was no car acrossed the road. At this moment, a car rushed quickly towards me. I was stunned and I can’t move myself and still stond there. Luckily, the driver broke the car qucikly and I didn’t get hurt. I couldn’t image what would happened if the car didn’t stop in that time.
When I acrossed to the side of the street, I try to keep clam down and I found me whole body was trembling. I always remembering the process just happened. And then I came back home told my parents what happened. They blame me as usual. That time, I knew I do a wrong thing so I didn’t said any words. They realized that I was frightened and comfort me, said “You must be careful in the future. Life is not a game.” In the end, I just know what they’re said was good for me.
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My roommate wrote an airticle about a terrible thing in her life.
There is one thing in my life I can’t forget. One day, I tried to across the intersection which is a traffic light near my home. I saw the light is red but I acrossed the road (anyway) because I can’t wait the light turn to green. I thought it is just a waste of time. I remembered there was no car on the road. At this moment, a car rushed quickly towards me. I was petrified and couldn't move myself so I still stood there. Luckily, the driver stopped? the car qucikly and I didn’t get hurt. I couldn’t image what would have happened if the car hadn't stopped in time.When I acrossed to the other side of the street, I tried to clam down and I found my whole body trembling. I always remember what just happened. And then I came back home told my parents what happened. They blamed me as usual. At that time, I knew I did do something wrong so I didn’t gainsay. They realized that I was frightened and comforted me, said “You must be careful in the future. Life is not a game.” In the end, I just knew what they said was just for trying to help me.
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Okay, thanks. >3<
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Try to mind the past tenses!
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