I like taking pictures.

I took a walk with my friends. Although I'm begginner, my friend and I like taking pictures. 
We wanted to take pictures of each other while we jump (up). My friend took pictures of me and it was they were good! It's like I'm flying. 
After that I took pictures of my friend and it wasn't really good. 
Since I pressed the shutter at the wrong timeing, she didn't look like she was flying. 
I asked her to jump again and again but it didn't work and she looked tired. I hope I i can get good (better?) at timing when to press the shutter.

I like taking pictures.

I took a walk with my friends. Although I'm a beginner, my friend and I like taking pictures. 
We wanted take pictures of each other while we jump. My friend took pictures of me and it was good! It's like I was flying. 
After that I took pictures of my friend and it wasn't really good. 
Since I pressed the shutter at the wrong time, she didn't look like she was flying. 
I asked her to jump again and again but it didn't work and she looked tired. I hope I can get the timing right when I press the shutter.

I like taking pictures.

I took a walk with my friends. Although I'm begginer, my friend and I like taking pictures. 

(First sentence, good.  Second - "my friend and I like taking pictures, although I'm just a beginner")

We wanted take pictures each other while we jump. My friend took pictures of me and it was good! It's like I'm flying. 

(We wanted to take pictures of each other while jumping.  My friend's picture of me was good!  It looks like I'm flying.)

After that I took pictures of my friend and it wasn't really good. 

(Afterwards, I took a picture of my friend but it wasn't good.)

Since I pressed the shutter wrong timing, she didn't look flying. 

(I didn't time the shutter release correctly, so it didn't look like she was flying)

I asked her to jump again and again but it didn't work and she looked tired. I hope i can get good timing to press shutter.

(I tried again and again until she was tired, but none were any good.  I hope I can learn to take them correctly.)