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English, travelling I am in Broome which is up north Western Australia. I arrived here nearly 3 months ago. It was very scary to be alone again and people used to tell me there is nothing in Broome and people are very dangerous. Yes it is. Broome has aboriginal culture but it means you can see the people on the grass day in and day out doing nothing and just relaxing and fighting sometimes. but obviously it's not their fault. Back in history the land in this country belonged to Aboriginal people and white people attacked them and killed them. Now for compensation, the Australia goverment give them money on a weekly basis which is 200 Australia dollars. People just buy the alcohol and cigarette wasting time in their life on the grass and everywhere. At first I was so scared of them and still feel in that way. If the goverment had had a different way to compensate them, they could have lived in a better way. I feel little bit sad everytime I see them.

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English, travelling

I am in Broome, which is up north Western Australia. I arrived here nearly 3 months ago. It was very scary to be alone again, and people used to tell me that there is nothing in Broome and the people there are very dangerous. Yes it is. Broome has an Aboriginal culture, but which roughly  means you can see the people there lazing on the grass day in and day out doing nothing, just relaxing themselves -- even fighting among themselves sometimes. But obviously, it's not their fault.

If you look back in history/ Historically , the land in this country belonged to the Aboriginal people, but and the white people attacked them and killed them. Now, as a form of compensation, the Australian goverment gives them money on a weekly basis, which is 200 Australia dollars.

But these people just buy the alcohol, and cigarettes and wasting time in their lives lazing on the grass and everywhere, where they can laze away their time.
At first, I was so scared of them and still feel in that way. If the goverment had had a different way to compensate them, they would have lived in a better way/they would lead a better way of life. I feel little bit sad everytime/whenever I see them.

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Your point of view is well,I appreciate and agree with it

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