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A little of my life. I am living in Salamanca, this moth I am looking a new room for next year. The last week I visited a floor with 6 rooms. I want the room of this floor but maybe I can´t, so this week I will visit others floors. This summer I want to work because I want to help my parent to pay my study. In my free time I like to walk in the park, and to read a book, or to listen the radio, and one day a week I go to microtheatre. I like to run three times a week but next moth I will go to foot´s medic, because when I run, I feel bad my right knee. I also go to jam session, last week I went an jam session with a schoolmate to play one song. I not sing because I think that I have a horrible voice. I play bass, but not very well, so I am a bad musician, but I will improve. I like bake salmon. A friend show me how to bake to “papiyote”. Only I have to cover the salmon with butter and aluminium, to put in oven and wait 10 minutes, very easy. ¡ I also bake napolitanas, I love it. I have friends that can created songs easily, and their songs help me to feel better myself, so I like to listen my friend´s music. When I go out in Salamanca, I like to meet new people and to make new friends. Hall days my schoolmate say me “ good germanticon” and I always laugh. He has a good sense of humor. The actually floor has four rooms, two bathrooms, one kitchen, one hall and one receiving. In this floor there are many old furniture, and it has a terrace of 70 m2.

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A little of my life.

I am living in Salamanca; this month I am looking for a new room for next year. The  Last week I visited a floor [an apartment?] with 6 rooms. I want the a room of this floor in this apartment but maybe I can´t  get one, so this week I will visit others floors apartments.
This summer I want to work because I want to help my parents to pay for my study studies.
In my free time I like to walk in the park, and to read a book, or to listen to the radio, and one day a week I go to micro theatre. I like to run three times a week but next month I will go to foot´s medic podiatrist/chiropodist because when I run, I feel bad my right knee hurts. I also go to jam sessions, last week I went to an a jam session with a schoolmate to play one song. I not  don't sing because I think that I have a horrible voice. I play bass, but not very well, so I am a bad musician, but I will improve.
I like baked salmon. A friend showed me how to bake to “papiyote en papillote”. Only I only have to cover the salmon with butter and aluminium, to put it in the oven and wait 10 minutes; very easy.  I also bake cook napolitanas sauce. I love it.
I have friends that who can create compose songs easily, and their songs help me to feel better myself, so I like to listen to my friends' music. When I go out in Salamanca, I like to meet new people and to make new friends. Hall [I don't understand this] days my schoolmate says to me “ good germanticon” and I always laugh. He has a good sense of humor.
The actually apartment has four rooms, two bathrooms, one kitchen, one hall and one receiving room. In this floor apartment there are many is a lot of old furniture, and it has a terrace of 70 m2.
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A little bit of my life.

I am living in Salamanca, and I am currently looking for a new room for next year. Last week I visited a floor with 6 rooms. I want this floor but maybe I can't get it, so this week I will visit others floors too.
This summer, I want to work so that I can pay for my studies.
In my free time I like to walk in the park, read a book, or listen to the radio, and once every week I'll go to the micro theatre. I like to run three times a week, but next month, I have an appointment with a podiatrist, because when I run, I feel pain in my right knee. I go to jam sessions too. Last week I went to a jam session with a schoolmate to play a song, I didn't sing because I think that I have a horrible voice. I play bass, but not very well, so I am a bad musician, but I will improve.
I like baked salmon. A friend showed me how to bake “papiyote”. I only have to grease the salmon with butter and cover it all in aluminum, put it in the oven and wait 10 minutes. I bake napolitanas too, I love them.
I have friends who can compose songs easily, and their songs helps me to feel better, so I like to listen to my friend's music. When I go out in Salamanca, I like to meet new people and make new friends. Hall days my schoolmate said to me: "Good germanticon" and I always laugh. He has a good sense of humor.
The actual floor has four rooms, two bathrooms, one kitchen, one hall and one living room. On this floor there are many antiques, and it has a terrace of 70 m2.

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A little of my life.

I live in Salamanca.   I am looking for  a new room to move into  next year.  Last week,  I visited a floor with 6 rooms. I want a room on this floor,  but maybe,  I still can´t acquire it.  So this week,  I will visit other  floors.
This summer, I want to work because I want to help my parents  in paying for  my studies.
In my free time,  I like to walk in the park, read a book, or  listen to the radio. Once a week,  I go to the movies. I like to run three times a week.  But next month,  I plan to go to a foot medic, because when I run, I feel pain in my right knee. I also go to jam sessions. Last week,  I went to a jam session with a schoolmate to play one song. I did not sing because I think  I have a horrible voice. I play bass, but not very well. So I think I am a bad musician.  But I will improve.
I like baked salmon. A friend showed  me how to bake  “papillote”.   I only have to cover the salmon with butter and aluminium, then place it in the  oven and wait for 10 minutes.  Very easy!   I also bake napolitanas, and I love it.
I have friends that can create songs easily, and their songs help me  feel better.  So I like to listen to my friend´s music. When I am in  Salamanca, I like to meet new people and  make new friends.  My schoolmate usually calls  me  a  “ good germanticon” and I always laugh. He has a good sense of humor.
The actual  floor has four rooms, two bathrooms, one kitchen, one hall and one receiving. On this floor,  there are lots of  old furniture, and it has a 70 m2 terrace .
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